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vandana
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0 posted 2000-11-10 12:04 PM



Hello,guys,Here, I'm with my favorite  lines from my poems.Just want to try it out .hope you like it.!!!!!!!
      
           Will you love me
like before,
    love me,
never let me go,
    
My love,
      after all we've been said and done,
   After all we've been through
you tell me to leave you,
      
    Hold me tight,
Don't want this night to end,
  I want this night to rememeber,
  hold me,
      
    Through the night,
here we go,
holding hands,
  you asked me
how I feel for this love,
through the nights,
      
Don't walk away,
It's hurts me
when you leave me behind,

We're miles apart,
   Don't you see
how far we are?
    And I don't have arms around me,

     Show me
what love has got to do with,
Show me all the love you have,
      
Love can hurt once,
Love can hurt twice,
when It comes toomorrow,
love will bring me sorrow,
      
Hope you like these line I have taken from my
poems.Enjoyed it!!!!! Poet's pen

© Copyright 2000 vandana - All Rights Reserved
wayoutwalt
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1 posted 2000-11-10 12:09 PM


very good yuh vandana it was a great idea maybe it should be a challenge?

Say it with me!
"This poem was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!"



Sven
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2 posted 2000-11-10 01:09 PM


Loved it vandana!!!

What a great idea. . . hey Walt, maybe this should a challenge!!!

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wayoutwalt
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3 posted 2000-11-10 01:23 PM


sven lez do it!!!
vandana
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4 posted 2000-11-10 02:18 PM


THANK YOU, BOTH OF YOU!!!!! I'M READY TOO LET'S DO IT pART 2 IS COMING UP TOO,SMILES  
Elizabeth Santos
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5 posted 2000-11-10 02:25 PM


What a great idea vandana, and how beautifully it turned out
Liz

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-10 02:32 PM


Good idea vandana..now all sorts of stuff is flying around in my head haa.

                 ~Victoria~

          


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7 posted 2000-11-10 07:10 PM


What a great idea, vandana!  I think I may just have to try this!  Wonderfully written!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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8 posted 2000-11-10 08:39 PM


VanDana~
This is just lovely.
What a wonderful idea to present to others.
Most enjoyable.
~*Marge*~


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vandana
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9 posted 2000-11-16 06:16 PM


Thank you for your kind words!!!!!!!!!
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