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Rainydays
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0 posted 2000-11-10 08:23 AM


"Colours"

Today we will see
leaves rusting
orange bronze
tarnished tangles
in piles, on ponds  
rotted tree bark
corroded, black,
dying upright
in hissing wind
grey concrete,
gritting hard

imprisoned bitter bite
of winter's sin


Rainydays

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1 posted 2000-11-10 09:21 AM


Rainydays~ this is very cool!   -SEA
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2 posted 2000-11-10 09:23 AM


Rainydays....
I'll trade your fallen leaves for this white stuff that put a blanket on the ground here!!
Loved this one.....and the images that your words projected!!  


Follow your dream!


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3 posted 2000-11-10 09:31 AM


RD* This is poetic perfection...very impressive work!!!
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4 posted 2000-11-10 10:11 AM


the colours of autumn, near winter..
yes we will see...wonderful poem

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5 posted 2000-11-10 12:15 PM


Thanks, girls. Sunny, it felt very close to snow here this morning and remains overcast, cold. Stay warm and take care, all.

Rainydays

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6 posted 2000-11-10 01:08 PM


Bundling up now. . .

Bring on the white stuff!!  WOO HOO!!!


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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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7 posted 2000-11-10 02:48 PM


Very November-ish...we're supposed to have snow here this weekend, it's in the forecast! Good work.

Elizabeth

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