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Wake Me
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Wake Me |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA 
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Wake me with touches like whispers Bring me out from this dream Dare to linger in warm places Inspired with more than I’d seen Wanting what I don't have Knowing what it could be The need that I am feeling The things you do to me The taste of your sweet venom The look in your evil eyes The fire that we've created The result of warm desires So wake me with touches like whispers The heat of this dark night Take me from dream to the realm Of the passions we share till the light |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Already there. Now...wake sweet, too. |
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Paula Finn Member Ascendant
since 2000-06-17
Posts 5546missouri |
OH baby...let me be the first to BITE...this is absolutely HOT Rich...MMMMM< !signature--> Don't close your eyes to the possibilities [This message has been edited by Paula Finn (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Wake me with touches like whispers Bring me out from this dream Dare to linger in warm places Inspired with more than I’d seen Wanting what I don't have Knowing what it could be The need that I am feeling The things you do to me ================= this is enchanting S,... a very sweetly inspired penning... written as softly as a whisper...kissed with subtle sensuality I got a very calm, comforting, feeling of serenity when reading this ... thank you for that ... take care jm |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Wow, this is really amazing. So gentle and tender yet full of fire. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
psst...you awake? |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
love to wake that way too...... well done. Charisma |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Thanks you all very much. nice to have so many responces. Rich |
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