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Delightful Cooler Weather of Mine

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Temptress
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0 posted 11-09-2000 10:35 PM       View Profile for Temptress   Email Temptress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Temptress

Autumn fading,
November month,
As this night,
The breeze is cooler.
Step outside with feet in the nude,
And feel the sharp grasp,
Of dropping temperature,
Assisted by,
A romping wind.
That wind has been playing all day,
Stomping the treetops,
And teasing wildly,
With mischievious fingers,
Playing like a child,
In every head of hair in the county.



My name isn't Baby, and I don't want to cyber.
© Copyright 2000 Jennifer - All Rights Reserved
vlraynes
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1 posted 11-09-2000 11:42 PM       View Profile for vlraynes   Email vlraynes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit vlraynes's Home Page   View IP for vlraynes


Temptress-
   oh no...this is not hitting page 2 yet!  
   i love the picture you've created in
   my mind...you've given the wind a
   personality all it's own.  
   wonderful!  

   hugs,
   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes


wayoutwalt
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2 posted 11-09-2000 11:56 PM       View Profile for wayoutwalt   Email wayoutwalt   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for wayoutwalt

lets all crowd surf tempty's pleasent poem yuh yuh
snowpants
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3 posted 11-10-2000 12:41 AM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

Great images, Temptress!! Love it!!

sp  


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4 posted 11-10-2000 03:05 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Hey, babe.  I betcha if I stepped outside in the nude right now, I would fall over from shock.  It's is frickin cold here, yo.  I forgot what twenty degrees felt like.  And boy it's a good thing I don't have a car since last night's wonderful car accident, cause I'd probably drive to Mexico so I could warm up.  LOL  
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~Temptress~
What a delightful read, I just loved it  
but hey thankfully our temperature is starting to rise now November's here (hooray)

~HUGS~
~TRacie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Elizabeth Santos
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6 posted 11-10-2000 04:15 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos

A perfect November poem. We are all feeling the "grasp of dropping temperatures", which you describe so wonderfully
Loved this
Liz
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7 posted 11-10-2000 07:29 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Temptress~
Good morning, sunshine girl !
I hope your dropping temperatures
don't come my way anytime soon.
Make mine warm and toasty.
~*Marge*~





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Robert Joseph
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8 posted 11-10-2000 11:37 AM       View Profile for Robert Joseph   Email Robert Joseph   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Robert Joseph


Cool air does ignite the soul, making ardent cravings all the more intense...Love this piece.


Robert Joseph
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9 posted 11-10-2000 01:15 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Ever step in the snow with no shoes on?? Brrrrrr. . . but it's strangely refreshing. . .  

This reminds me of that feeling. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Temptress
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vlraynes:
Thank you for saving it from the void!   The wind has its own personality, and I love trying to describe it.

Walt:
Thanks!  

Snowpants:
I'm glad you enjoyed the images!   I love creating images!

Masked Intruder:
HIYA SWEETIE! How is it that I always miss you these days?   I wish it was colder here. I know I'll be sorry for saying that sooner or later, but I'd like to have a cold Christmas this year instead of a mildy warm one. Geesh..You had a car accident? You just HAVE to e-mail me. PLEASE?


tracie:
Thank you for enjoying the poem, and November is a beautiful month. Sometimes overlooked I think.


Elizabeth:
Thank you. It is an honor to have you read my work as I enjoy yours very much!

Marge:
You always have a way of making me feel better. Thanks! Ohh..and thanks also for the e-mail!  

Robert:
WOw!   I definetely agree! Thanks for reading!

Sven:
I'm glad you liked it! LOL! Hmm..in the snow without shoes..Well, it wasn't deep snow, but my feet made their way to warmth pretty quick! Maybe its refreshing AFTER the sting wears off?  


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nice
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