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Marge Tindal
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25 posted 11-09-2000 10:01 PM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

BUMP !


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26 posted 11-09-2000 10:07 PM       View Profile for Poet deVine   Email Poet deVine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Poet deVine

As promised. I do keep my word.

[This message has been edited by Poet deVine (edited 11-09-2000).]
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27 posted 11-09-2000 10:23 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

just came by for another taste of this sweet treat ..
think of it as "just desserts"
winkiewinkie baby (hehe)
goes down SMOOOOOOTH with raspberry tea    
me
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28 posted 11-09-2000 10:39 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

The word "Beautiful" would not even begin to compliment this exsquite piece of writing.  Mark, you break all boundaries with your talent, my friend.  

I am, as always, in awe of you...  


Marina


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29 posted 11-09-2000 11:12 PM       View Profile for dgvarner   Email dgvarner   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for dgvarner

mmm...WOW!  
....
       ....
   ....
...wow....
i'm left rather speechless other than that...

   this is awesome!

hugs, dg


"i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..."
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30 posted 11-10-2000 04:07 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Santos   Email Elizabeth Santos   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Santos


Mark
Your poem is as beautiful as what you describe. I love the title and how it's applied. This is a poem to make anyone swoon, for sure, but more than that, it's beauty is to be remembered

Liz
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31 posted 11-10-2000 04:12 AM       View Profile for Masked Intruder   Email Masked Intruder   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Masked Intruder

Sometimes when I forget that I'm only 18, I remember some things like this that I've never experienced.  Reading this was better than sex.  But since I haven't had sex, I imagine most things still are better than sex.  *grins*  Loved your imagery...I was so there.
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32 posted 11-10-2000 04:14 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

~Sigh~ and a big one at that  
This is so incredibly beautiful Mark...well penned, well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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33 posted 11-10-2000 06:41 AM       View Profile for Sudhir Iyer   Email Sudhir Iyer   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sudhir Iyer


ABSOLUTELY BEAUTIFUL!!!!


My regards,
Sudhir
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34 posted 11-10-2000 10:36 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Mark my friend, the weekly meeting of the MBOOPAS, will now come to order, or I'll punish you all by reading you mine instead. (Ahhh now that's brought this rowdy group to order)Here are their comments in order that I got them.

I was first, And I think this is the very very best, Marsha go away I want to whisper something back to Mark. ************* Daphne
(What am I going to do with her?)

That's not fair, Daphy got to go first, and I was. I love it, more than you do      Sue
(Don't argue with her it'll make her worse)

Oh WOW that is sooooo amazing, I love this                                   Kelsy
Not as much as I do. (Daphnie, please be quiet, he knows you like it!, okay you adore it.)

This makes me feel quite hot           Delia
Love this one                           Jan
Can I go home early, this is really something.                              Fran
(No you can't!)
Wonderful this is my favourite one      Pat
This is such a great poem               David
Phew, someone open a window Great work   Mel
(You touch that window and I will push you through it!)
Okay you lot back to work and no slacking!!
They all love this one, and you already know that I do. A really beautiful and passionate piece.
Take care
                    Mushy Marsha



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Only a memory of the same
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35 posted 11-10-2000 12:00 PM       View Profile for A Whisper's Caress   Email A Whisper's Caress   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for A Whisper's Caress

MArk,

you make my heart beat just a bit faster with this!!!


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36 posted 11-10-2000 01:26 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Mark~ you know I have Auburn hair don't you............ ..........just stopping in to let my heart flutter before I get back to work.....*SIGH* kisses   -SEA
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Mark my friend, Daphne and Sue, have insisted on having this on the screen through their whole shift. And they want me to tell you that they have actually enjoyed work today because of it.
(They've enjoyed it because they haven't done any.) No seriously I've managed to get them to do some. Anyway they both send you their thanks and lots of sighs.
Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
(What will I do with them?!!)


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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38 posted 11-10-2000 01:55 PM       View Profile for OLIAS   Email OLIAS   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for OLIAS

This is very hot Mark, a wonderful use of image and emotion, great work.
Regards
Olias
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39 posted 11-10-2000 02:21 PM       View Profile for Wilfred Yeats   Email Wilfred Yeats   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Wilfred Yeats's Home Page   View IP for Wilfred Yeats

I think we need a separate crown (King of 'hot') assuming we craft one - you'll be the current holder  - and besides - it has your talent all through it - into my treasure box!
Highlander
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40 posted 11-10-2000 02:53 PM       View Profile for Highlander   Email Highlander   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Highlander

It's as if we were both writing of the same woman, I couldn't have penned a more appropriate verse for what I'm feeling.
I enjoyed this.

Andrew

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41 posted 11-10-2000 07:07 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

Hey Mark!  Just me stoppin' by for another read!!

sp  


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42 posted 11-10-2000 08:19 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

wow mark... you the man.  

I'm glad i'm not a woman, cause I hate to swoon and sigh for another man's poetry...
So i'll be safe and just say, amazing... which is hardly a worthy discription.

Parker
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43 posted 11-11-2000 06:11 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Mark my friend, had to come back to this one tonight of all nights. I'm in serious need of something to make my night fly by. Considering the images that this gives me, I'd say this was jus the perscription for what ails me tonight. (And Daphnie doesn't appreciate this half as much as I do!)   This is really such a beautiful poem, and I really do love it.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
Marge Tindal
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44 posted 11-19-2000 02:01 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

Mark, sweetie~
Please drop by the local hardware store and pick up one of the new-fangled thermometers that was used to check the temperature on this one -
http://piptalk.com/pip/Forum43/HTML/000122.html

After all - Oven temperatures may vary
and I think it will come in handy for your next roasting !
I have a coupon !
*winking* and *hugging* and *missing* you !
~*Marge*~


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45 posted 08-08-2003 06:53 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

Mark, I can't believe I missed this beauty. Definitely a keeper.
D

Stand straight and tall, not the reflection as others see you, but as you truely are.        Clearwater

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46 posted 08-08-2003 09:28 AM       View Profile for Marge Tindal   Email Marge Tindal   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marge Tindal's Home Page   View IP for Marge Tindal

MarkB~
Do you KNOW how *tickled* I am at seeing this one make the daily board ???
Smiling with *remember*~

Ya' know .... it's as GORGEOUS as it was the first read !!!!

*Huglets* my friend~
~*Marge*~

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47 posted 02-23-2008 08:30 AM       View Profile for Dee   Email Dee   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Dee

An amazing gift from an amazing poet. We are lucky

D
 
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