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Open Poetry #10

I Travel Light

Poeminister
Senior Member

since 2000-02-26

Posts 1862
Regina SK; Canada

0 posted 2000-11-09 09:05 PM

I Travel Light

In poetry I roam
far from my home
I leave all things behind

I travel light
up stratums bright
for new bright ones to find

God is love
and things above
are waiting for our eyes

The universe
is to traverse
we can o'er leap th' skies

We Terrestials
of celestial souls
amass essence of eternity

And I am
one modicum
One word in time's soliliquey

One small mote-
one poet,
under this ever expanding dome

But still i burn
and always return-
always find a new way home.

"...no single sound too rude
Upon thy slumber shall intrude,
Our thoughts, our souls- O God above!
In every deed shall mingle, love."
--Ed

Marge Tindal

Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-06

Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores

1 posted 2000-11-10 08:18 AM

PoeMinister~
Your thoughts shine brightly in this piece.

'One small mote-
one poet,
under this ever expanding dome

But still i burn
and always return-
always find a new way home.'

We'll keep the lights on !
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Charisma

Member Ascendant

since 2000-09-30

Posts 5906
lost in blue pages

2 posted 2000-11-10 09:25 AM

enjoyed reading it....wonderful penned.

Charisma

SEA

Moderator

Member Seraphic

since 2000-01-18

Posts 22676
with you

3 posted 2000-11-10 09:27 AM

PM~ Wow! This is fantastic.

-SEA

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

4 posted 2000-11-11 07:41 PM

very nice last stanza...adds just the right touch to the rest

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