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Fairwell My Dream
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Fairwell My Dream |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Fairwell, My Dream Remove and draw, window bare control the sun no more raise forth thy darkened silenced soul to speak, breathe the still of air. Draw nigh the calm the storm hath passed, denote a death of dream, pray not venture into soul my spirit hath prevailed! fairwell, my dream, fairwell. Inspired by Michael's poem, "Purgatory". [This message has been edited by compassion (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Stunning!! I definately think you've found your muse! Wow!  -SEA |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Oh Compassion...I have been looking for a poem from you and this one is wonderful...Welcome to Passions and thank you for all your sweet replies! |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Compassion-- welcome to Passions. I have seen your posts to others works and was hoping I'd see a poem of your own...now that I have...I see that I was right, your poems are as wonderful as your replies. Excellent poem! Take care. Amy |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Welcome to Passions...you've been sent a special e-mail! I will look forward to more of your work! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Compassion~ Welcome to the inspired posting side of Passions. Wonderfully done. Now ... we'll look for more ! ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
59 replies and then a post now thats a passion poet to live up too! great poem compassion bein hopin you would post |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I am so glad to read your words and certainly a wonderful opening by a compassionate soul {{hugzz}} ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know how but I must have reset my response by mistake...I loved your first posting and have been waiting for it...now for want of more Well I just noticed it posted both..I must have a fever...still...  ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Temptress
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Member Rara Avis
since 1999-06-15
Posts 7136Mobile, AL |
Wow! Powerful, and beautifully written. |
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