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wayoutwalt
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0 posted 2000-11-09 08:04 PM


Splendefirous, wunnerful poem you got!
It twas really awesome and required some thought!
I think I understood it so I’ll say "WOW Yuh!
Anything else is more than I’ll allow yuh

Your mind is deep as the river is wide
Your poem was stupendous all giggly inside
Snickers and sniggles your poem was funny
I hope it was spozed to be as my nose is runny

I cried a lonely tear drop your poem was sad
I can’t say this but I think it was bad
Your poem was as pretty as your poet name
So hoping to woo you I wont say it was lame

Your poem was awesome no really I mean it
I know I’m generic I think you have seen it
Great job, good job, excellent post!
But this time I think your poem’s the most

Poetry in motion is what Passion’s about
Some get big replies and some go without
Here is a reply to this poem I'm writing
It was awesome! Terrific! Totally exciting!



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Denise
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1 posted 2000-11-09 08:08 PM


Awesome!! Terrific!! Totally Exciting!!  

Pretty Cool, Walt!!

Denise

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2 posted 2000-11-09 08:10 PM


Walt~

It was awesome!
Terrific!
Totally exciting!

And THAT's THE TRUTH !

You just keep us in stitches !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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vlraynes
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3 posted 2000-11-09 08:19 PM



Walt-
yep...let me just be original here
and say that this was...ummm...
AWESOME...TERRIFIC...
and...oh yeah...

TOTALLY EXCITING!!!  


   little conformist am i...lol    
  
   i do honestly love this...you always
   give me a laugh and a smile.    

   -vicky


< !signature-->

"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes






[This message has been edited by vlraynes (edited 11-09-2000).]

wayoutwalt
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4 posted 2000-11-09 08:24 PM


thanky folks it twas totally inspired by that awesome poet pdv i am so excited to say in her terrific post in the bad astericks here forum english workshop
ethome
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5 posted 2000-11-09 08:25 PM


AWESOME!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TERRIFIC!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

TOTALLY EXCITING!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

inot2B
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6 posted 2000-11-09 08:29 PM


When I first read the title of your poem the first thing that went through my mind was gosh it sounds just like Lawrence Welk.
Wonnerful Wonnerful Wonnerful

wayoutwalt
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7 posted 2000-11-09 11:00 PM


thanky guys and gals lawrence welk blah

3 cheers

awesome!
terrific!
totally exciting!!

elisaseyes
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8 posted 2000-11-10 09:53 AM


Your not a bad guy Walt.
Your terr-i-fic

Charisma
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9 posted 2000-11-10 10:34 AM


what can I say that wasn't said before....mmmm....let me think....ok....this line you haven't heared before ..though....

It was awesome!

Terrific!

Totally exciting!



love those lines.....    

(hugs))
Charisma

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10 posted 2000-11-10 12:33 PM


Someone didn't get enough coffee this morning...feeling a bit....jaded?  
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11 posted 2000-11-10 01:03 PM


ROFL             

"the best part of waking up. . . "

Aweriffic!!!

Terexting!!!

Splediferous!!!!

Great job Walt!!

-----------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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