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How I Like To Wake Up (My 1000th post)

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Marsha
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0 posted 11-09-2000 06:31 PM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha


My 1000 post and I nearly missed it.

How I Like To Wake Up

Rising through the embers of my misty dreamy night
I open my weary eyes to see your contented smile
I drowsily smile back hoping I'd turn back the light
You laugh and say that I can have just a little while
But given the choice between sleep and your delight
I'd choose to bring back that loving contented smile


Sleeps cobwebs are swept away in loves eager flame
As my reaction to your kiss is as instant as a touch
A fire storm sweeping us into this passions hot game
Amazing that we always want each other this much
Heat that swirls and sucks us into it's storm the same
Only saved from drowning by the safety of your touch


Each time I'm pulled, fall into this madly burning fire
I think that we've reached the end of our lovers' heat
And each time I'm overcome with passions' hot desire
Each time I think that there's nothing at all left to beat
You shoot me further in the heavens taking me higher
My eyes dilate with sheer wonder of this magical feat


Marsha


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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1 posted 11-09-2000 06:36 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Marsha~ this is so sexy!!   Love it.......nice way to wake up my dear........ and Congratulations to you sweetie!   -SEA
ethome
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2 posted 11-09-2000 06:47 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

CONGRATS!! on your 1000th and it is a hell of a good one!...right full of firey passion and intense heat from start to finish....you're really doin them up fine!!  I'll be checking on you so beware now..write write write!!!
Paula Finn
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WOW Marsha...what a sensuous way to awaken..and what a glorious 1000th...congrats to you
tracie66
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4 posted 11-10-2000 05:07 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

~MM~

Great piece of poetry girl....a worthy 1000th post...good on ya
CONGRATULATIONS
~HUGS~
Tracie

My fav part

Each time I'm pulled, fall into this madly burning fire
I think that we've reached the end of our lovers' heat
And each time I'm overcome with passions' hot desire
Each time I think that there's nothing at all left to beat
You shoot me further in the heavens taking me higher
My eyes dilate with sheer wonder of this magical feat


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


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Cause she has sensuality...congratulations on 1000 big ones...James
Marsha
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6 posted 11-10-2000 05:27 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Circe, thank you muchly, and isn't it typical of me to very nearly miss my 1000th. I was going to go for the soft delicate touch. And then I thought noooooo I don't want to do that! Actually it wasn't a conscious choice at all, these sort of appear, by themselves.  
Take care of yourself love
             Mushy
                    
Ethome, thank you, I truly do thank you. It doesn't seem that long ago since I was the very new girl on the block. I was in total awe of all the talent here, in fact I still am. I came because I needed to and stayed because here is my home and you all are all my family. So thanks kindly.  

Paula, Thank you, thank you muchly, I seem to only write three types of poems lately, mushy, funny, or warm. Although this one seems quite hot.  

Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
                           


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-10-2000).]
Marsha
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Tracie, thank you love, I do appreciate it, you know I do. I'm sorry I missed you and James I left my screen and then hit the submit by mistake. Really glad you like it, truly.    

James, that is such a nice compliment. Thank you very muchly.  

Take care
                Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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8 posted 11-10-2000 08:55 AM       View Profile for Charisma   Email Charisma   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Charisma's Home Page   View IP for Charisma

CONGRAT with your 1000th....and what a wonderful way to celebrate that.....great way to wake up ...and I will look out for the next 1000.

((warm hugs))
Charisma
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9 posted 11-10-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for Sunnyone   Email Sunnyone   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunnyone's Home Page   View IP for Sunnyone

Marsha......
Just wanted to add my CONGRATULATIONS to the gang's on your 1000th!!!!!!!  I hope to read many, many more of your wonderful poems here, as I love what you write so much!!  


Follow your dream!

Robert Joseph
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Marsha, sounds like a wonderful morning to me...I believe this fire would burn without logs...smiles.


Robert Joseph
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Charisma, thank you, I do appreciate you I really do. I still can hardly believe it's 1000, my doesn't time fly when you're having fun.  

Hey lil sis, thanks love, I love that graphic, you know I'm totally bemused by them. Which is why I'm always awestruck that anyone can get them to work. (I come from the idiotic side of the family you know, we're fun to be with but not a lot of use intellectually.)
Take care love
              Bubbles
Robert, MMmmmm yes I do believe you are right.

Take care
                 Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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Now, why can't I wake up like this???

Congrats oh Mushy One. . . and here's to the next 1,000 Mushy Ones!!!!!

--------------------------------------------------

That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Marsha
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Sven, I think it's more a case of whom and where you wake up, as opposed to how.  
Glad you like this one, you do don't you? I was just checking.
Take care                 
                  Mushy Marsha
                        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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14 posted 11-10-2000 05:07 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Congrats on 1000 Marsha...you've only just begun...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


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Congratulations 1000 WOW!



It seems like only yesterday
you cam to passions, began to play
as you posted we wanted more
and watched with glee as your poetry soared
you gave your heart and mind as well
encouragement for all who fell
and now the time has come to say
thank you and be here always

Be well
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy
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Kari, thank you, it's been a wonderful 1000, and I look forward eagerly to whatever may come. You know how much I love your work, and I reiterate it your work is inspired, and always wonderous. Thank you for the beauty you have brought me.  
Take care
            Majestic Marsha                
                  
Kethry, my sweet friend, that is so kind of you. And I thank you truly, I don't deserve the gifts of your words, but I'll accept them because they are so delightful. Thank you for your work which always makes me smile
or moves me to tears. Truly a gift you have.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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Martha, congrats on your 1000th submission! and a lovely poem as usual
Jon
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Jon, thank you very much. I'm pleased you liked this one. I suppose I feel a bit sentimental about this because I never imagined that I'd get to 1000. It truly seems just like yesterday, and now I really couldn't imagine life without Passions at all. Many thanks
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                      


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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excellent!
 
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