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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-09 03:00 PM


Winters glove adds magical charm
sprinkling snowdust outside firelight warm
watching the flames in the firelight dance
a tango of sonatas.. my eyes in a trance

Your cerulean eyes in the firelight smile
your eyes sparkle as i dream for a while
cherry blue sultry flames in the fire
my blood swirls..blazing thoughts of desire

A bed of yule logs seduce the night
inviting sweet thoughts of you and us
rendezvous within the firelight
teases me with your love.. and thus

My love entices the flames of romance
on a bed of fire, our bodies dance

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A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)  



[This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-10-2000).]

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ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-09 03:08 PM


I know what you mean Victoria...it's a wonderful cosy feeling to be inside by the fire while the winter snow is swirling around outside....there are so many mystical images that a warm glowing fire can induce leading the poetic types to dreams of wonderment ..it's enchanting fairytale type of atmosphere....I love the way you've described it here.
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Victoria~ you'll set the night on fire with this one! love it   -SEA
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3 posted 2000-11-09 03:11 PM


WOW.....seems as though the mood of the forum is set for the day as this one it yet another beautiful rendition to that special moment that only true love bears with it.  Lovely and very tender in it's warmth and honesty.
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4 posted 2000-11-09 04:54 PM


ethome..thank you so much..so glad you enjoyed ethome..nice to hear from you

SEA..Thank you ..and for peeking in today Sea..

Mark..We are all in a firelight mood today i guess..if not hopefully i put you all in one..thank you Mark..glad you enjoyed..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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5 posted 2000-11-09 05:01 PM


I think I need to get the fireplaces going!!!  This is great

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
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6 posted 2000-11-09 10:07 PM


Victoria~
This is certainly BLAZING !
Lovely !
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Victoria
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7 posted 2000-11-10 09:56 AM


thank you peppermint and Marge..yes i have to get my firelight going too  haa..so glad both of you enjoyed..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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8 posted 2000-11-10 10:02 AM


Your cerulean eyes

love the  way your color your words, ~V~ just beautiful  
Good morning to you

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II



Robert Joseph
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9 posted 2000-11-10 10:31 AM


your eyes sparkle as i dream for a while
cherry blue sultry flames in the fire


Victoria, a fiery image, I've not seen before...enticing, without doubt.

Robert Joseph

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10 posted 2000-11-10 10:50 AM


enjoy the read!!!!!!!!!
Victoria
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11 posted 2000-11-10 01:58 PM


Wynter..Good afternoon..nice to hear from you as always..

Robert.. thank you..Well Robert you will have to watch thoses flames more often haa..

Vandana..Nice to hear from you again today..glad you liked.

              ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Irish Rose
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12 posted 2000-11-10 02:15 PM


very lovely, Victoria

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



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