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Barely There Kisses...SEA inspired
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Barely There Kisses...SEA inspired |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Barely There Kisses The first time we met, I barely looked up shyness had me on hold. 'Twas last snow of the year I remember it so, but I felt how your eyes warmed my cold. I knew from the moment, we sat face to face and you swept me over in look, we were connected, just wasn't sure how and it left me a little bit shook. Timid I was, and at times, still it shows, but relax me in thoughts, each caress Wondering why, you had touched me that way while watching your lips, word express. As you lifted my chin, and your hands graced my face in goodbye touch, until then, I never expected, the feelings suppressed to rise up, just barely again. Barely there thoughts, and barely there touches and kisses I bear in my mind. waiting, I will, 'til the next that we meet until then, dream I, barely confined. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Wow!! I can imagine what kind of poem you're going to come up with when you really get into it with this person.... it should broil, roast, scorch, swelter, sizzle and then smoke........this is a beautiful poem and it's so well written ...I can feel the timidity in your lines but also the yearning great stuff!! |
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ You have to know I love this.....wow.....very pretty.  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
nicely done Wynter..always nice to be inspired by someone.. ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
twas a nice inspiration, expressed your words so well.....I love and enjoyed reading it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
ethome...you will have to wait 'til after Thanksgiving for anything sizzling, although I have something deep inside wanting to burst forth...maybe later, I have been wanting to express some more adult like feelings, but then, I may have to go to the other forum...and don't know if I will be read there...  ~Wynter With Whisper Kisses thanking you and your wonderful response "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA- this was written just from your inspiration, I have so many many feelings pent up inside of me and lately they have had a hard time escaping...but when I see words or phrases that you and some of the other talented poets write, well it releases them from my heart and this one made me feel good to write and for that I owe you a debt of gratitude.{{huggzz}} and I will be looking for more from you... ~Wynter in momentary Bliss < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Victoria- yes and this was an ispiration of words with an inspiration from heart...a nice combination thank youCharisma- I always like to hear from you and I am happy you enjoyed this one {{huggzz returned}} ~Wynter< !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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