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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-09 01:05 PM


for her, words are life
they are her breath
          her blood
they beat in her heart
          and pulse through her veins
giving her another day of life
          another day of strength

she writes to live
she writes of her life
       her hopes and dreams
       become known to us
because it is what she knows
she finds solace in the words
     she gives us comfort in the words
          she becomes in the words
becoming more than a poet
               more than a writer
               more than a person
she becomes the poem

for her, words are life
and when she writes them
we welcome her into our hearts
          our minds
                    our souls
we welcome
       her words of life

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That which gives light must endure burning
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[This message has been edited by Sven (edited 11-09-2000).]

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Mark Bohannan
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1 posted 2000-11-09 01:12 PM


I have been reading all of your dedications to all the fine poets here and I must say that you have nailed each and every one of them to a tee.  This one is no exception and you have brought to the blue pages a perfect verse of one of my favorites.  I don't have the time that I used to have to spend in Passions replying to all of the lovely pieces here but I couldn't let this one go by.  You are a true poet and a dear friend to so many here and your words show this in your wonderful tributes to the all of those within this wall.  I applaud you and bow to your excellence of both pen and heart.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart
2 posted 2000-11-09 01:29 PM


Oh yes, this is Lady Elizabeth...her essence and soul...well done...

Karilea
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I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Aimster
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3 posted 2000-11-09 02:02 PM


Sven--

another masterpiece you have created!
you have portrayed our Elizabeth quite
accurately in my eyes...much applause from
this poet! beautiful. take care.

~amy~  

ethome
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4 posted 2000-11-09 02:10 PM


Sven thanks for this one and you have written this so well because your description of Elizabeth is so accurate.....she is without a doubt one of my all time favourites...I hurry to read her work.....there is so much life and truth and reflection in her wonderful poem tales...well, I just can't say enough.

keep up the good work Sven!!

Kethry
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5 posted 2000-11-09 03:43 PM


Sven,
perfection personified  
Be well
Kethry


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Gail Sheehy

Martie
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6 posted 2000-11-09 03:46 PM


Oh..this is so well done..Liz has such a special heart...and a natural ability to write it...filled with much wisdom and strength....thanks for posting this Sven.
Charisma
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7 posted 2000-11-09 03:50 PM


yes that is our Elizabeth....another amazing piece from your hand.

Charisma

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8 posted 2000-11-09 04:02 PM


Sven~
It's been a richly rewarding year spent here with Elizabeth~

She has a wonderful gift and shares it so freely with us all.

Your piece does her honor and that's as it should be.
She's a fine poet and friend.

Thank you, Sven.
~*Marge*~


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Elizabeth Santos
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9 posted 2000-11-09 04:29 PM


Sven,
I have enjoyed so much reading your gallery of poets. These have been some of your finest work. Each poem is so unique. I was tearfully warmed when I saw my name attached to one of them. If this is your perception of me, then I am truly honored, because I have had difficulty communicating all of my life until I discovered poetry a year ago. I was always so shy and never realized how much there was to say. Thank you, dear friend for this lovely tribute. I am humbled by your words, for you have captured in it those things that are most important to me - the truths of life, the beauty of life, and loving others and giving of yourself. Thank you for your beautifully written poems about all our poet friends. Each and every one has been unique and exquisite.
Liz
I look forward to more

Thank you, poet friends, for your lovely comments. You have brought quite a few tears. I appreciate your words
Liz

[This message has been edited by Elizabeth Santos (edited 11-09-2000).]

Temptress
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10 posted 2000-11-09 09:58 PM


I welcome her and her words any day. This was a beautiful tribute to her, Sven.  

Lone Wolf
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11 posted 2000-11-09 10:27 PM


Sven,

You have done a remarkable job capturing the essence of Elizabeth here.  Well done.  

I have always enjoyed her poetry very much. She writes with such feeling and from the heart.  A treat to read.  

LW


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

tracie66
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12 posted 2000-11-10 06:16 AM


for her, words are life
and when she writes them
we welcome her into our hearts
          our minds
                    our souls
we welcome
       her words of life

Indeed Sven we welcome her words...her words of life....her life

well done my friend on another fine addition to your beautiful passions gallery
~HUG~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



JamesMichael
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13 posted 2000-11-10 12:30 PM


Exactly..Sven you choose your words so well...James
Rainydays
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14 posted 2000-11-10 12:37 PM


This is another treasure, Sven, and very moving. Fine writing for a fine writer.

Rainydays

Sven
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15 posted 2000-11-10 12:57 PM


Thanks to everyone that replied. . . I am glad that you all have enjoyed this one. . . it was indeed an honor for me to write.

Elizabeth, since I came here a year ago, your poems have touched me, moved me, and inspired me. . . I have become a better poet and a better person because of them. . . you have a beautiful and wonderful gift my friend, and I, if not all of us, are honored and blessed to have you share that gift with all of us. . . thank you my friend. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


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