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Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
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Charlotte, NC

0 posted 2000-11-09 11:26 AM


"Fantasy"

In the heat of the night
I hear you call my name
As the rain comes pouring down
Dancing & tapping against my window pane

The moon hangs high in the ebony sky
As the stars come out tonight
Sounds of distant thunder
Lightning flashes across the sky, what a awesome sight

I almost can hear your heartbeat
Even though you aren't here
Can feel the heat of your skin
As though you are quite near

In the heat of the night
Your body with my lips I want to trace
With eyes of love
I would sweetly gaze at your beautiful face

Wherever you are I want you to know this
Mountains I would move, for just another kiss
I want to feel your body pressed against mine
As higher into escstacy we would climb

Satin sheets tangled, as we would become one
The night and heat of passion only just begun
Flicker of candlelight dances upon the wall
As soft sighs would fill the room, your name I would call

For now this will remain my fantasy
Until I can see you once more
Then together in love and passion
Our hearts will once again soar

Amy M. Kennedy

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
rascalx
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since 1999-08-25
Posts 590
Florence, SC, USA
1 posted 2000-11-09 11:30 AM


Amy,

     Given the passion that Tara and I shared when it came to fulfilling each other's fantasies, reading your poem was bittersweet. But it is also very well written and you paint both an erotic and loving picture with your words.
                         - Jeff

Elizabeth Cor
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since 2000-10-13
Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods
2 posted 2000-11-09 11:40 AM


A heartfelt piece of emotional yearning… thank you for sharing, Amy.

~ Beth

Sven
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3 posted 2000-11-09 12:48 PM


Amy. . . I think that you've really found it with this one. . . I really do. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-11-09 02:05 PM


R--
hope it wasn't too sad for you. thank
you for your heartfelt reply...you made
me smile.

Beth-- you are very welcome, and thank
you for your lovely comment. hope to
read some of your work sometime soon.

Sven-- i think i have too   i surely
hope i have. i love her so much. thanks
for your support.

Take care.
~Amy~

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
Posts 1471
Hillcrest, Queensland, Australia
5 posted 2000-11-09 07:02 PM


Aimster,
Very well written, I really enjoyed this.

"The moon hangs high in the ebony sky
As the stars come out tonight
Sounds of distant thunder
Lightning flashes across the sky, what a  awesome sight"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
6 posted 2000-11-09 07:06 PM


'I almost can hear your heartbeat
Even though you aren't here
Can feel the heat of your skin
As though you are quite near'

Hey, girlie!  You've penned some excellent lines, once again, my friend!  Very romantic!  Love it!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
7 posted 2000-11-10 03:07 PM


Amy you really dug deep with this one and did a wonderful job...ethome
Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
8 posted 2000-11-10 04:44 PM


Daniel--

thanks for the sweet reply. im glad you
enjoyed  

Kris--
awwww you make me blush   thanks girlie
for your support. as always it means
a lot to me...

Ethome--
considering how much i like your work
your compliment was huge to me. thanks
for making me smile.

Take care.
~Amy~  

Kethry
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082
Victoria Australia
9 posted 2000-11-10 05:34 PM


Amy,
if I had to use two words to describe this piece they would be erotic and yearning. But as I don't I will say brilliant, encore! I loved it, More, more! take a bow.
Be well
kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

passing shadows
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displaced
10 posted 2004-06-26 01:48 PM


beautiful!
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