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Aimster
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since 02-19-2000
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Charlotte, NC


0 posted 11-09-2000 11:26 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Aimster

"Fantasy"

In the heat of the night
I hear you call my name
As the rain comes pouring down
Dancing & tapping against my window pane

The moon hangs high in the ebony sky
As the stars come out tonight
Sounds of distant thunder
Lightning flashes across the sky, what a awesome sight

I almost can hear your heartbeat
Even though you aren't here
Can feel the heat of your skin
As though you are quite near

In the heat of the night
Your body with my lips I want to trace
With eyes of love
I would sweetly gaze at your beautiful face

Wherever you are I want you to know this
Mountains I would move, for just another kiss
I want to feel your body pressed against mine
As higher into escstacy we would climb

Satin sheets tangled, as we would become one
The night and heat of passion only just begun
Flicker of candlelight dances upon the wall
As soft sighs would fill the room, your name I would call

For now this will remain my fantasy
Until I can see you once more
Then together in love and passion
Our hearts will once again soar

Amy M. Kennedy
© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
rascalx
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1 posted 11-09-2000 11:30 AM       View Profile for rascalx   Email rascalx   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit rascalx's Home Page   View IP for rascalx

Amy,

     Given the passion that Tara and I shared when it came to fulfilling each other's fantasies, reading your poem was bittersweet. But it is also very well written and you paint both an erotic and loving picture with your words.
                         - Jeff
Elizabeth Cor
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Oregon (yeah!)


2 posted 11-09-2000 11:40 AM       View Profile for Elizabeth Cor   Email Elizabeth Cor   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Elizabeth Cor

A heartfelt piece of emotional yearning… thank you for sharing, Amy.

~ Beth
Sven
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3 posted 11-09-2000 12:48 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Amy. . . I think that you've really found it with this one. . . I really do. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

Aimster
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4 posted 11-09-2000 02:05 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

R--
hope it wasn't too sad for you. thank
you for your heartfelt reply...you made
me smile.

Beth-- you are very welcome, and thank
you for your lovely comment. hope to
read some of your work sometime soon.

Sven-- i think i have too   i surely
hope i have. i love her so much. thanks
for your support.

Take care.
~Amy~
Daniel J D
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Hillcrest, Queensland, Austral


5 posted 11-09-2000 07:02 PM       View Profile for Daniel J D   Email Daniel J D   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Daniel J D

Aimster,
Very well written, I really enjoyed this.

"The moon hangs high in the ebony sky
As the stars come out tonight
Sounds of distant thunder
Lightning flashes across the sky, what a  awesome sight"

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)
snowpants
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since 09-16-2000
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6 posted 11-09-2000 07:06 PM       View Profile for snowpants   Email snowpants   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit snowpants's Home Page   View IP for snowpants

'I almost can hear your heartbeat
Even though you aren't here
Can feel the heat of your skin
As though you are quite near'

Hey, girlie!  You've penned some excellent lines, once again, my friend!  Very romantic!  Love it!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...
ethome
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7 posted 11-10-2000 03:07 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

Amy you really dug deep with this one and did a wonderful job...ethome
Aimster
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8 posted 11-10-2000 04:44 PM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

Daniel--

thanks for the sweet reply. im glad you
enjoyed  

Kris--
awwww you make me blush   thanks girlie
for your support. as always it means
a lot to me...

Ethome--
considering how much i like your work
your compliment was huge to me. thanks
for making me smile.

Take care.
~Amy~  
Kethry
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since 07-29-2000
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Victoria Australia


9 posted 11-10-2000 05:34 PM       View Profile for Kethry   Email Kethry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kethry

Amy,
if I had to use two words to describe this piece they would be erotic and yearning. But as I don't I will say brilliant, encore! I loved it, More, more! take a bow.
Be well
kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy
passing shadows
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10 posted 06-26-2004 01:48 PM       View Profile for passing shadows   Email passing shadows   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for passing shadows

beautiful!
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