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Sunshine
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0 posted 11-09-2000 08:48 AM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine


She Said Hello

It was an incredible first word

a beginning
and a promise
blended into a breath
becoming a given pledge

the creation of paradise on earth

a coming home
a warmth
an opening
invitation to forever

the creation of paradise on earth

and like the sound of angels wings
like spirits of old welcoming new
a pronouncement of the heart
pressed soft to the ear of the receiver

the creation of paradise on earth

all she bestowed was the whisper of

eternal sun
a sanctuary for the soul
endless journeys into night
promises never to be forgotten

it was an incredible first word



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




[This message has been edited by Sunshine (edited 11-09-2000).]
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SEA
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1 posted 11-09-2000 09:10 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Sunshine~ this is wonderful......'a begining and a promise' enjoyed   -SEA
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2 posted 11-09-2000 10:15 AM       View Profile for Aimster   Email Aimster   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Aimster

karilea--

beautiful poem..."hello" is such a wonderful
word that makes everyone smile. you have
penned a truly wonderful poem m'friend.

take care.
~Amy~  
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3 posted 11-09-2000 10:33 AM       View Profile for Marsha   Email Marsha   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Marsha's Home Page   View IP for Marsha

Kari, this is utterly delightful. Hello such a simple word and a promise. This is a beauty you've penned here. I love this, an inspiration, and you've done it again, I love this one too.
Take care
                  Marsha
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning
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4 posted 11-09-2000 12:03 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

SEA...so pleased to see you happy...

Amy, handing out smiles is easy...

Marsha, too true, I'm in my simple form today...thank you all!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


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5 posted 11-09-2000 12:09 PM       View Profile for RainbowGirl   Email RainbowGirl   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit RainbowGirl's Home Page   View IP for RainbowGirl

Huh, Sunshine says "I'm in my simple form today"...I think it's more like 'splendid form'...*g*

HUSG
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6 posted 11-09-2000 12:28 PM       View Profile for Sven   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Sven

Hello Sunshine!

I think that says it all. . .  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl

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MMMMM and dont we just anticipate that first hello from that perfect stanger looking to be a friend or more...hello...yes hello...its the beginning

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities

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RG, you are too cute...

Sven, sounds like a song...no, wait, that's good morning starshine......now, get THAT tune out of your head...

yes we do, Paula...as it should be!...

thank you all...



Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


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A little word attached to so many
things...this was wonderful reading Sunshine~
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Thank you BDC....so glad you enjoyed....

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


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and I only realize how incredible just now after reading you
 
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