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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


0 posted 11-09-2000 07:23 AM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for nakdthoughts


Half Full

A voice is all
I have to hold
in times of desperation
and need.


A touch is all
I can recall,
when emptiness
inside me feeds.


A whisper kiss
to end all kisses,
a memory,
like treasured gold.


Banded to me,
now removed.
I am so suddenly,
feeling cold.


Whatever lays
ahead in time,
as sands turn over
to make each day,


I shall survive
and come the evening,
theses eyes of mixture,
shall reflect it's stay.


Focused on
another's blues,
to shed some warmth
of lending arms,


The Wynter's coming
just be prepared,
to consequences
of blended charms.


As each particle
becomes ingrained,
into your soul
of endless time,


Turn by turn,
the glass half full,
shall never empty,
in heart of mine.


"Farewell", I say.
"'Til next we meet".
Often I hear this
deep inside.


Awaiting turn,
the dreams shore up,
will slowly keep
me bound and tied.


Arresting me,
in shadow's light,
a hint to tease
of choices made.


The glass, half filled
will turn for days,
until these passions
have been allayed.


~Wynter Bliss




"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II






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SEA
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with you


1 posted 11-09-2000 09:22 AM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Wynter~ this is stunning   -SEA
Victoria
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2 posted 11-09-2000 09:25 AM       View Profile for Victoria   Email Victoria   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Victoria

very lovely Wynter..hope you warm up real soon..

                     ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)

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Deep in the heart


3 posted 11-09-2000 09:53 AM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

A voice is all
I have to hold
in times of desperation
and need.

A touch is all
I can recall,
=================
Sweet memories - haunting - positive.
I feel your emotions.

Live for love. Without love, you don't live.

Ron K. Fox
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A whisper kiss
to end all kisses,
a memory,
like treasured gold.

The Wynter's coming
just be prepared,
to consequences
of blended charms.

Certainly a poem of memories and a longing for that love gone...you will be fine, of that I'm sure. Winter may be a cold season, gives lots of time for reflection, but you are able to capture beauty and warmth in it, I've seen those in your other works, also I've seen some hint's of horizons in your work, so just keep your eyes on them. smile. always wishing you the best. Ron




Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


5 posted 11-09-2000 08:38 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

SEA - thank you for the "stunning"  ..just writing my innermost feelings {{huggzz}}

Victoria- well  I  hope so too, thanks hon.

Interloper- thank you, for being able to feel from my words  

Ron- I know I will be fine, just that roller coaster ride  sure does have me  dizzy at times..thank you, you are a dear....just don't tell that ballad  guy I said so.

~Wynter


"The worst prison would be a closed heart".
...Pope John Paul II


ethome
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6 posted 11-10-2000 05:28 PM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

This is a melancholy poem but it is stacked with the same kind of beauty that makes the heart realize that we all have problems but if we can get them out like this it's a real help to cleansing the soul....write to us ...we all know somewhere on the road, the one with twists and turns  where yesterday has fallen but you never know what's on the road ahead.......there's always sunshine after rain......have a good night!
hoot_owl_rn
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The best thing about those coaster rides is they always end sometime, no matter how topsy turvy they make us and the nice thing about winter is that it keeps us looking forward to springtime...here's to a great spring  
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The Shores of Alone


8 posted 11-10-2000 08:15 PM       View Profile for catalinamoon   Email catalinamoon   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit catalinamoon's Home Page   View IP for catalinamoon

Oh WOW, I love this. Wynter's coming..perfect, let them all watch out..
This has so much in it, longing, sadness, and a hint of determination and maybe even a little payback..Am I reading it right?
Anyway, it's fantastic.
Sandra
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9 posted 11-10-2000 09:48 PM       View Profile for Gentle Spirit   Email Gentle Spirit   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Gentle Spirit

Wynter, one can feel every word in this.  Well done.  
passing shadows
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gawd! I know about that ride
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