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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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Half Full A voice is all I have to hold in times of desperation and need. A touch is all I can recall, when emptiness inside me feeds. A whisper kiss to end all kisses, a memory, like treasured gold. Banded to me, now removed. I am so suddenly, feeling cold. Whatever lays ahead in time, as sands turn over to make each day, I shall survive and come the evening, theses eyes of mixture, shall reflect it's stay. Focused on another's blues, to shed some warmth of lending arms, The Wynter's coming just be prepared, to consequences of blended charms. As each particle becomes ingrained, into your soul of endless time, Turn by turn, the glass half full, shall never empty, in heart of mine. "Farewell", I say. "'Til next we meet". Often I hear this deep inside. Awaiting turn, the dreams shore up, will slowly keep me bound and tied. Arresting me, in shadow's light, a hint to tease of choices made. The glass, half filled will turn for days, until these passions have been allayed. ~Wynter Bliss < !signature--> "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Wynter~ this is stunning  -SEA |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very lovely Wynter..hope you warm up real soon..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
A voice is all I have to hold in times of desperation and need. A touch is all I can recall, ================= Sweet memories - haunting - positive. I feel your emotions. Live for love. Without love, you don't live. |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
A whisper kiss to end all kisses, a memory, like treasured gold. The Wynter's coming just be prepared, to consequences of blended charms. Certainly a poem of memories and a longing for that love gone...you will be fine, of that I'm sure. Winter may be a cold season, gives lots of time for reflection, but you are able to capture beauty and warmth in it, I've seen those in your other works, also I've seen some hint's of horizons in your work, so just keep your eyes on them. smile. always wishing you the best. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
SEA - thank you for the "stunning" ..just writing my innermost feelings {{huggzz}} Victoria- well I hope so too, thanks hon. Interloper- thank you, for being able to feel from my words Ron- I know I will be fine, just that roller coaster ride sure does have me dizzy at times..thank you, you are a dear....just don't tell that ballad guy I said so. ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This is a melancholy poem but it is stacked with the same kind of beauty that makes the heart realize that we all have problems but if we can get them out like this it's a real help to cleansing the soul....write to us ...we all know somewhere on the road, the one with twists and turns where yesterday has fallen but you never know what's on the road ahead.......there's always sunshine after rain......have a good night! |
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hoot_owl_rn Member Patricius
since 1999-07-05
Posts 10750Glen Hope, PA USA |
The best thing about those coaster rides is they always end sometime, no matter how topsy turvy they make us and the nice thing about winter is that it keeps us looking forward to springtime...here's to a great spring |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Oh WOW, I love this. Wynter's coming..perfect, let them all watch out.. This has so much in it, longing, sadness, and a hint of determination and maybe even a little payback..Am I reading it right? Anyway, it's fantastic. Sandra |
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Gentle Spirit Member Patricius
since 2000-10-09
Posts 13989 |
Wynter, one can feel every word in this. Well done. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
gawd! I know about that ride |
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