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All the wiser |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa 
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If moonlight shadows Spoke to me With answers that I seek Then all the wiser I would be At times when I felt weak For late at night I often plead For help when I feel ill With nobody To heal my need But a moonlit window sill |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
WoW this is great..i love your poetry kevin...take care..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
good to see you again kevin great poem of how i used to feel yuh man i likes it |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Kevin-- wonderful poem...you know i really LOVE your work! you have a very amazing gift and time and time again i'm blown away by your beautiful talent. more please! take care. amy |
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Elizabeth Cor Senior Member
since 2000-10-13
Posts 879Over the river and through the woods |
The tempo perfect, the mood so sweetly sorrowful… all in such a few wonderful lines. Beautiful, I loved it! ~ Beth |
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Marina Member Elite
since 2000-02-10
Posts 2245Pickering, Ontario |
The flow and the rhythm scheme are perfect Kevin. You need to stop by more often. I do so love your poetry... Marina< !signature--> It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen Marina Crossley [This message has been edited by Marina (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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~ViXeN~ Member
since 2000-01-09
Posts 93Guelph, Ont. Canada |
Kev, Kev... Every time I come on here, I am surprised with something wonderful!!!!! HugZ!!! Shan |
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Kevin
since 1999-11-02
Posts 729Torrington, Ct, Usa |
Thank you victoria I dont know what else to say hehe, ill just capitilize it, THANK YOUWalt, I havent been as outspoken, But ive always been around, You guys get me through the day, thanks Amy, Your following of me does impress me, You are always there with kind words, It is appreciated Thank you beth, its one of my favorites I try Mar, But as is, I only call my mother once a week, busy busy busy, Thank you for always being here when I do drop in though Shan, You know you can always read my stuff, just ask for it lol |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Kevin~ such beauty in these words of your's...very impressive and inspirational...well done If moonlight shadows Spoke to me With answers that I seek Then all the wiser I would be At times when I felt weak For late at night I often plead For help when I feel ill With nobody To heal my need But a moonlit window sill ~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Masked Intruder
Moderator
Senior Member
since 1999-05-23
Posts 1231Near golden sunsets |
Hey, Mikey! He likes it! *grins* |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed reading this...James |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
What a great rhythm with this one, it had an "old flavor" and I loved it! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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brian madden Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 4374ireland |
kevin wonderful poem, really enjoyed it. "an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women". Patti Smith |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
Hi Kevin. This is grand writing. Thank you ~ Rainydays |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Really great poem! Deb |
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