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Open Poetry #10

no one's there (repost yuh)

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

0 posted 2000-11-08 10:38 PM

Don’t light a candle for my remorse
I’ll chase my dreams on endless course
And never wonder where they alight
But dream your fingertips tonight

Through fields of fresh cut flowers mourn
That I should wake and thus stillborn
And for every fallen daffodil
I wish my dreams would lay me still

Missing pieces found at last
Now I know what might have passed
Now I see what’s black and white
But blessed with all the colors bright

I love a nightmare to bathe in sweat
I love a sin I can’t regret
A nursery rhyme that’s out of whack
Point your finger and three point back

I love you and you love me
I love a dream where I’m still free
Dreams are my imaginary friends
Dreams and I love to pretend

ethome
Member Patricius

since 2000-05-14

Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada

1 posted 2000-11-09 12:45 PM

There's got to be someone there Walt because somebody had to write this poem and you had to dream those dreams so if there's no one there then who is posting all this....I enjoyed it very much....ethome

wayoutwalt
Member Elite

since 1999-06-22

Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)

2 posted 2000-11-09 09:47 AM

thanx ethome smiles yuh

inot2B
Member Elite

since 2000-09-18

Posts 2205
Arkansas

3 posted 2000-11-09 10:25 AM

Keep dreaming that is one way to stay out of trouble. Of course make sure you don't call out someone elses name in your sleep. I don't dream in black/white it has all colors of the rainbow.

Elizabeth Cor
Senior Member

since 2000-10-13

Posts 879
Over the river and through the woods

4 posted 2000-11-09 10:34 AM

"Now I see what’s black and white
But blessed with all the colors bright"
... Fabulous!
I really liked this walt.

On dreams: "So if I dream I have you, I have you,
For all our joys are but fantastical".

~ Beth

Paula Finn
Member Ascendant

since 2000-06-17

Posts 5546
missouri

5 posted 2000-11-09 10:51 AM

Walt...ahhh you really make my mind wander with this one...dreams fantasies...YUH

Don't close your eyes to the possibilities

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