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Parker
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0 posted 2000-11-08 08:04 PM


Her Ever Constant Star

I've seen those tears so many times
With so much love
So many times for you…

A mind that holds the very thoughts
With so much heart
The very thoughts of you…

Her soul has shown the deepest care
With so much truth
The deepest care for you…

The ache she wears for all to see
With so much strength
And for all to see of you…

An Angel is her ever-constant star
With so much Love
DeVante' her ever constant star is you.

James Parker Haley  (c) Nov 8, 2000


** For my friend Janet and her ever
** constant star…. DeVante'
** you show so much love in your words.

Parker...            





[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 11-09-2000).]

© Copyright 2000 James Haley - All Rights Reserved
Butterflies_dont_cry
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1 posted 2000-11-08 08:09 PM


Oh my goodness Parker...she is going to love
this...and cry as hard as I am right now!
This is so beautiful I just can't even fully
describe it...you are an angel sweet Parker
and this is amazing~


ethome
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2 posted 2000-11-08 08:11 PM


Great tribute to a real sweetheart Parker you could'nt have made a better choice and you wrote it so well....ethome
Butterflies_dont_cry
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3 posted 2000-11-08 08:14 PM




see what happens when you make me cry!



[This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-08-2000).]

Janet Marie
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4 posted 2000-11-08 08:26 PM


Oh P-man ... you have touched my heart tonite and hung my moon ..
you have no idea...
thank you so very very much for this gift
thank you for seeing him in me ...and helping me celebrate him.
you know that there is no gift I treasure more than that of poetry..
and friendship ...and you have shared both with me..
thank you seems too little to say, and really doesnt do this or you justice.
your so special my sweet friend.
love you for this....
I owe ya a pedestal built by angels for this one  
Thank you Parker ... always

Marina
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5 posted 2000-11-08 09:08 PM


James,

This is a tremendous gesture of kindess and love to our dear Janet Marie.  I know how much she will truly apprecaite this wonderful poem for her amazing muse.  He is indeed an incredible soul, that through JM we have all come to know and admire.

This poem is most definetly a perfect example of the wonderful friend you really are.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Sunshine
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6 posted 2000-11-08 09:12 PM


Parker, it is so welcome to see someone who will look beyond the veil, into the pale, and see the heart...

this was lovely...


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



vlraynes
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7 posted 2000-11-08 09:17 PM



Parker-
   this is so beautiful.  
   you are such a sweetheart for
   writing this for Janet Marie
   and her DeVante'.  
   wonderful, my friend.  

   -vicky




"...until you have read the verse on his
heart, you have not truely met the poet."
-vlraynes



poetic_imperfection
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8 posted 2000-11-08 09:21 PM


What a wonderful poem to read tonight. Who ever these poeple are are truelly blessed. Thanks for the wonderful read!
serenity blaze
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9 posted 2000-11-08 10:46 PM


You are something else, Parker. This is fantastic...I don't have the words to describe---and I'm so glad you did. HUGS to all...
A Whisper's Caress
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10 posted 2000-11-08 11:13 PM


this is beautiful
I loved every word


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

Martie
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11 posted 2000-11-08 11:36 PM


Parker--Janet is a special lady and her poetry lights up her heart and soul on the page...thank you for this wonderful poem...you are special too.
dgvarner
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12 posted 2000-11-09 01:56 AM


parker.this is such a sweet tribute..makes me sorry i dont know the story behind it..but whatever it is..this devante must be some very special someone to janet marie    

what a wonderful friend you are for picking out her beauty from the pages, holding it close to your heart, and spilling it here in such wonderful lines for janet marie  

hugs,dg


"i could hide out under there...i just made you say 'underwear'...i could leave but i'll just stay--all my stuff's here anyway..."

Parker
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13 posted 2000-11-09 10:05 AM


Butterflies, thank you.  

ethome, thanks pal.  

Butterflies, your very sweet when you cry.  

Janet, your words of DeVante' constantly echo on these pages. His soul seems to be a part of passions too. He speaks to us all through your words. I for one think we would be less without his visits through you.
Hugs my friend, for you and him.    

Marina, thank you.  

Sunshine, thank you.  

Vicky, thank you.  

poetic_imperfection, thank you and welcome.  

serenity, thank you.  

A Whisper's Caress, thank you and welcome.  

Martie, thank you.  

dg, thank you sweets.  

Parker


SEA
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14 posted 2000-11-09 10:21 AM


Parker~ this is amazing and so sweet......I love the viewpoint you took. *SIGH* such sweetness   -SEA
Parker
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15 posted 2000-11-09 01:50 PM


SEA, thank you sweet lady.  

Parker

Mark Bohannan
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16 posted 2000-11-09 03:17 PM


Parker, my man......holding Jan's friendship as dear as I do and knowing the depth of the love that you have written for...well, I have no shame in telling you that tears well up in my eyes on this one.  You have penned a beauty and I already know her response to this as I have heard it from her personally.  Your works have always made me aware of the masterful pen you write with but this one not only falls in that catagory but it is written with the love of friendship that you have in your heart and you have shown that in PERFECTION. I applaud you and I once again bow to you.  
Parker
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17 posted 2000-11-09 05:10 PM


Mark, thank you good poet. Just my humble attempt to show what I see, in her words and in her heart.  

Parker

Charisma
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18 posted 2000-11-09 05:28 PM


a wonderful tribute for Janet....you have done a good job, really love it.
beautiful and sweet.

((hugs))

Charisma

Marina
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19 posted 2000-11-09 10:47 PM


No star shines as bright as your heart, in this exceptional gesture...  

A second read seemed only appropriate.  

Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley


Janet Marie
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20 posted 2000-11-10 12:48 PM


thank you again for this P-man..very much
and thank you to all who replied to this lovely tribute with such wonderful accepting words of my poetry for him...
trust me every word is heartfelt..
as is every line in this beautiful poem.
love to all
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~


Elizabeth Santos
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21 posted 2000-11-10 04:12 AM


This a a very well deserved tribute to the girl who keeps us smiling, whose heart has room for everyone, and who expresses that love so charmingly every day. Her responses are as vibrant as the poetry she comments on, and she is an inspiration to us all.
This is a very beautiful tribute
I enjoyed reading it
Liz

tracie66
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22 posted 2000-11-10 04:18 AM


James~
Comes straight from the heart this beautiful piece of poetry...well penned
lovely written words for the beautiful hearted Janny...well done  
~HUGS~
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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23 posted 2000-11-10 04:31 AM


Hi there. My name is Philip Zemler. And I just wanted to say that....well....you are my new idol.  Can I have your autograph?
Parker
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24 posted 2000-11-10 09:51 AM


Charisma, thank you sweet poet.  

Marina, thank you.  

Janet, it was a pleasure to write about you.  

Liz, she is very special to us thank you.  

Tracie, thank you.  

Philip, well not sure how to take you comment, but thanks for reading.  

Parker

[This message has been edited by Haleyja (edited 11-10-2000).]

Janet Marie
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25 posted 2001-06-24 09:52 AM


Back into my library this special gift goes..  

thank you again P-man...more than you know..
(actually..I know you do know) ...
thats why you wrote this beauitful poem.

Pedestals baby...Im building ya a pedestal  

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