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Whispers Caress Of Fires Heat
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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Whispers Caress Of Fires Heat Whispers caress my ears with sheer delight Such joy fills me with shining divine light Your breath feathering against my breast My lips part move ever closer to your chest Your mouth brings flames to lick my skin I tumble into your eyes diving further in You are my angel of loves heated desire One touch from you sends me into the fire Always eager to join you within the flame Always different never ever the same The stars wonder as we shoot across the sky With you holding me I know I can fly My breath comes in shallow and breathy sigh My body shaking, trembling against your thigh Our desires like rivers flood and then pour I'm calling, begging you, please I want more Realease when it comes like a shot from a gun I'm spinning ecstatically into the burning sun Your breath catches like mine it stands still Hold me close please tell me that this is real Never have I had such deep and utter awe Joyful delight fills me deep within my core I never knew you were waiting here for me Within my soul you and I will eternally be Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
WOW! Marsha get it on girl! whew this is a bold senuous poem...it's just rockin..very very good writing here...the reader has no choice but to be captured by the content. Great trip you went on and took me with you oh that lucky guy you share these feelings with!!....I'm only jealous....have a nice day ...............ethome |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Well now. Not gonna go there! Evocative, provocative and down right mmmmmmmmhhhmmmm! jwesley |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Ethome, the heat does tend to spill out a little, I know. Thank you, and I'm pleased that you were taken on the trip with us. It is indeed some wild trip, sort of exhilarating  To say the very least.  Jwesley, Ah so did you enjoy it then? Oh was it just a little slow? Thank you for the compliment  Take care Marsha Definitely nothing mushy about this one Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
How quickly that flame becomes a raging inferno!  loved the title too! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Eddie, Mmmmm well it does for me anyway, I think it's what they call chemistry, I just call it love. Glad you liked it. Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Okay, enough is enough.....I don't know who lit your fire as of late but you got the whole place steaming up in here with this one and all the others you have been posting. WHEW!!!!!!! lawdy girl.....ya trying to make the cowboy keel over or something? Now tell that dude to move over and get on out of here.....cowboy wants to try whispering some  |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
ahem Marsha?...you there?...or has someone come and whisked you away yet?... whew, girl... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, getting a little warm for you? Surely not, in all the cowboy films I've ever seen there's always a hot sun beating down. So what would you like to whisper? I'm all........um ears! Besides remember this is England and it's been cold here, and raining almost constantly. I have to do something to keep my temperature up, and it's such a pleasant way too. Mmmmmmm Take care Mushy Marsha  < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, I'm all present and correct, well ish. Sorry I had to leave my screen and I missed saying thank you kindly to you. You do like it? Well if it can warm me up I'm sure the heat could be spread around just a little. Mark, sorry I didn't say thank you, but you know I meant to, really I did. So what was that you were about to whisper........ I promise not to set off any incendiary devices honestly. Take care Mushy Marsha and for Kari Majestic Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
....Marvelous Marsha.... This is such a good day to whisper! Mmmm, I think I love this poem with it's passionate heat and fire!! You're going to have to install cold showers if you keep this up!!  (Really loved it!!) Follow your dream! |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hiya lil sis, cold showers? Haven't we had enough rain, if this river bursts it's banks again I'll be just a bit miffed. So you like? Anyway kid don't you need to warm up there in Alaska! Or are you having our weather, because whoevers' we have they are welcome to it. It's okay I won't complain until the water is lapping at my chin and then I'm going to complain a lot. Take care love Bubbles Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Phewwwwwwwwww! what have you been up to sexy Marsha? Hot stuff. Cheers! Jon |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jon, ME! I'm innocent guv'nor, honestly I wasn't there, it was someone else and any other reasonable or even unreasonable excuse I can come up with. Getting a little warm Jon? I can't imagine why, Mmmmmmmm. (I think I need my ummm thermostat tweeking, now where is my......... ) I'm pleased you like it, I do too! Take care Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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