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Victoria
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0 posted 2000-11-08 02:11 PM


     love strums a melody within your soul
     plucks softly at the strings of your heart
     makes you want to tango..dance the samba
     the cha cha ..dance the rumba
     with each new love a new song to behold

     why does love make you want to float
     like the fluidity in a graceful cloud?
     or soar like a dove..with your belove
     in the moonlight ..or the sunlight
     aglow..an aura of candlelight

     makes you want to fly..makes you sigh
     makes you cry..makes you ask Why?
     Why it may disappear,in a blink of an eye?




A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


© Copyright 2000 Victoria - All Rights Reserved
ethome
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1 posted 2000-11-08 02:17 PM


Those are very good questions Victoria and they deserve good answers but no one can answer them.......just think how little we would have to write about if we could explain love completely and clearly....naw that'd be no fun....we love the mystery in love and the magic it brings to our soul and you have expressed that here very well.....really wonderful!!
Irish Rose
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2 posted 2000-11-08 04:51 PM




"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Victoria
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3 posted 2000-11-08 06:32 PM


ethome...thank you for your kind response..so glad you enjoyed my words.

Kathleen..thank you for peeking in haa..
i dont where you are but youre  here somewhere..

               ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Dopey Dope
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4 posted 2000-11-08 07:09 PM


The title drew me in. I liked this very much. *dances*



I was born myself, raised myself, and will continue to be myself. The world will just have to adjust.

I hate your socks. I'd like to burn them!


jwesley
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5 posted 2000-11-08 07:21 PM


"Is passion spent
when love says 'goodbye'
have two hearts died,
will you and I still survive..."

Why, we'll never know, or understand, I guess
my friend.  Lovely way to pose the question, though...

jwesley

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-08 07:53 PM


DD..Hi Dopey..nice to hear from you..glad you liked..

Jwesley..thank you for visiting.. and appreciate your kind comments..

           dancing away..

                ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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