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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho 
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throwing caution to the wind the message in the mirror was meandering unhappily reminded of how this freshman fifteen had turned to a dull senior sixty taking care of lousy business trying to travel light shed a few pounds improve diet get active tired spirit hit the sofa where to begin lazy afternoon thought of clues looked to do's life hit true away it flew now your dead what of you emotion felt much more to say < !signature--> Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. ~Marge Tindal~ [This message has been edited by lucky (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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Rosemary J. Gwaltney Senior Member
since 1999-08-26
Posts 997northern mountains, Idaho |
Interesting nutshell of a life, with your usual eyebrow-lifting ending. I can really relate to the words "tired spirit hit the sofa" ...! |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Dale--we have had plenty of wind here, to throw caution into...but the sofa sounds nice too...must write longer email to you...soon. Hugs to you and RG |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
Thank you RJ, you know this was just foot notes to become a draft. Never made it, did it..? Martie, So the weathers F-I-N-E, and your right, it's a good time to check out the sofa. I think I'll try one of those Welsh drinks and try and find it. Love ya Sis. than ka you. I'll get an "e" off to you too. Life's a rush. always love. dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
I really love the free-thought, flowing style in which you write...again, I'm impressed! Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Love the freedom in this and love that quote! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Great format and really flows well.... nice thoughts to consider....very good work!! |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Like the style of this one, have to read it carefully and in depth to make it all work... which in turn makes me get more out of it  lol Great write.Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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lucky Senior Member
since 2000-01-17
Posts 1601Idaho |
First of all I'm astounded at the reply's on what I call foot notes. I'm sure I could have done much better if taken the time. I catch ideas and jot them down and hope. I thank you all. ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ ~ azure, Grats. on your 50th. I write mostly free form as you can see, it allows me an edge for the unusual art style. Irish, Don't see to much of you, I thank you and I'll have to take a closer look... see what your doing. Thanks Laurie ethome, I thank you again my friend. ThUnDeRkYsS, thanks for the compliment on style... I really like your signature; speaks my heart. dale Writing isn't just something I do, it's something I am. To write of feelings that touch all hearts in some manner is my delight. -Marge Tindal |
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