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eyesplus2
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since 2000-03-02
Posts 163
australia

0 posted 2000-11-08 03:49 AM


I.........
A letter and a Word...........
Separating and Joining..........

Love..........
A gift and a Wish..........
Joining Two forevermore...............

You.........
A Wish given life..........
A Dream that came true........

I Love You....
From this day forward........
In a dream that is our life........


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Dee
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since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330
Queensland, Australia
1 posted 2000-11-08 03:53 AM


eyesplus2
This is so beautiful yet simple, with so few words you have said so much. I love it.
Dee


I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand

tracie66
Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713
Australia
2 posted 2000-11-08 04:24 AM


This is so exquisite, simply beautiful...well done
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

3 posted 2000-11-08 09:50 PM


I really like how you did this one. glad I found it.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox



LoriJaye
Junior Member
since 2000-10-23
Posts 34
Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2000-11-08 10:12 PM


Glad I read this one tonight...I'm sending it to my Love

Simply eloquent...loved it.

"A smile is when your inner beauty comes outside."

poetic_imperfection
Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45

5 posted 2000-11-08 10:16 PM


Simle, elegant and pure love.

PW

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