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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738
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In the call of quiet mind a blanket's fur so soft and kind to sink into a dream supine-- I'll meet you there, beneath the pine of cover in a forest deep the spring of moss, beneath my feet, the smell of musk so strong but sweet, and birth of fire in your eyes... I blush, again-- the virgin bride a woman born from heart of child (don't make me look-- you know I'll cry...) Paradise...she whispers--"wild..." |
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tracie66 Member Elite
since 2000-01-18
Posts 4713Australia |
Serenity~ The images in this are beautiful, you have written this so well...good on you  a perfect write hon~HUGS~ Tracie~ Love is the life of the soul... It is the harmony of the universe |
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Severn Member Rara Avis
since 1999-07-17
Posts 7704 |
the spring of moss, beneath my feet, the smell of musk so strong but sweet, and birth of fire in your eyes... would you be offended if I told you there that this is quite phillaud? LOL... but I mean it hon... damn good writing K KThe wind shifts like this: Like a human without illusions... This is how the wind shifts: Like a human, heavy and heavy, Who does not care. W.S |
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Marge Tindal 
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Serenity~ This is so soft and lovely. 'a woman born from heart of child' Yes ... ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
the smell of musk so strong but sweet, and birth of fire in your eyes... I blush, again-- the virgin bride a woman born from heart of child (don't make me look-- you know I'll cry...) Paradise...she whispers--"wild..." ================== OH BABY!!!!!!!!!!!!! (can i watch)    me girlie girl this is enchanting in its mystical beauty ... my goodness this is a sweet way to start me day... perfect sen ...pure unsullied poetry... and ya wear it well me sweet I adore this poem!!!Its so...you. later-me musky-whispering-gator me |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
Oh wow, what wonderful images this brings to mind Serenity....beautiful! Bonnie |
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SEA
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Serenity~ I am blown away......the beauty of your words made me *sigh*......I love this. Very sensual. -SEA |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
I agree with JM completely. This is lovely not only in the writing but all it's context. Truly love the read. jwesley |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Tracie--always a pleasure to see ya pop in, I thank you much for reading. K.--lovin' the scarlet pimples...lol thank you lady!!! Marge--warm hugs and thanks JM--love ya much as always, thank you--e ya later!! Bonnie--thank you, o writer of anglic verse, I appreciate your reading!!! SEA--yes, it was a sensual little meditation thang goin'--grin...thank you lovie jwesley--what a nice surprise, and any friend of Janet's is a friend of mine. Thank you all so much---hope to catch up on my reading soon....My grats. |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
oh boy oh boy...this SINGS... as do you! Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Serenity girl, you KNOW that deer LOVE the forest so I have to assume that you wrote this poem for me....THANK YOU!!! Meet you in the thistles around noon! |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Serenity this is so well written my friend just a wonderful piece......that's quite a trip you took me on there....right into paradise she..whispers "WILD!".......whew very good!! loved much....ethome |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Beautifully done this does sing. Rich |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
wonderful penned......I love the image that you show....nice written. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Quick thank-yous---Karilea, I always appreciate your kindness, and I do love your work, it's so lyrical...I'm betting that you play music. deer--sounds like you know the spot...lol...I'll be there. (winks n hugs) ethome--my earth buddy, should have known you'd show up! luv ya much, drop me an e, and let me know how things are going... Rich--thank you, m'luv, for all of your kindnesses....smooches Yikes...forgot my dear Charisma, who's been writing her heart out lately...my apologies, I DO thank you. and vicky...it's lovely to see ya here too...we'll try the chat thing again soon, 'k? [This message has been edited by serenity (edited 11-10-2000).] |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
serenity- this is so lovely. very beautifully penned... enjoyed it much. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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