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Cerenity
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0 posted 2000-11-08 12:14 PM



My Dreams This Day Amplified


Tossing rose petals in the wind
Watch then toil not, just spin
Where they go, who shall know
Lightly dancing to and fro

My dreams I send same way
Tossing them in winding waves
Hoping on winged flight to find
They come back to me amplified

Understanding my dreams this day
I dance, sing and play time away
No fear I have for I do know
What I want, which way to go

Tossing rose petals to the wind
Taught me how not to toil, but spin
Giving my dreams a chance at flight
Now I dance both day and night

So toss your dreams to the wind
Watch them toil not, but spin
Fulfill your hearts desires
Don’t wait till they expire

By, Cerenity


This is an attempt at rhyming, so I hope its OK.




"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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Victoria
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1 posted 2000-11-08 12:26 PM


you did a wonderful job of rhyming..i have trouble with the free verse..haa..enjoyed

                 ~Victoria~

A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Cerenity
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2 posted 2000-11-08 10:59 AM


Hi Victoria,

Thank you so much for your kind reply.

Love, Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


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3 posted 2000-11-09 10:55 PM


I love the picture of rose petals flying in the wind. And if you can make your dreams come true, I am happy for you. Beautiful images here, and the rhyming was fine.
Sandra

Cerenity
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4 posted 2000-11-10 11:54 AM


Sandra,

Thank you so much for your kind reply,
dreaming I can make my dreams come true, or at least I now what I want I guess.

Love, Cerenity

Butterflies_dont_cry
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5 posted 2000-11-10 12:19 PM


Miss Cerenity~ The imagery you painted in my
mind was so very beautiful...you just keep
dreaming those beautiful dreams...with a
heart like yours they will land and bloom.
Excellent writing~

Paula Finn
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missouri
6 posted 2000-11-10 12:21 PM


Cerenity...this is very beautiful...the image of rose petals spinning through the air...like a drift of rainbow clouds...beautiful
Sven
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7 posted 2000-11-10 01:07 PM


Cerenity, sending rose petals your way my friend. . .

Good job with the rhyming!!!  

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Cerenity
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8 posted 2000-11-10 02:24 PM


Miss. Butterfly,
Thank you, some times when depressed, it helps to take flight and imangine your dreams coming true, and what better way than on the petals of a rose.

Paula,
Thank you as well, the weather has been a little breezey and I just happend to be in the garden when the idea came to mind,

Sven,

Hi,
Please buckets and buckets, its a beautiful sight, hope the big Vac. is great! thank you.

Love to all,  Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)


brian madden
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9 posted 2000-11-11 07:41 PM


perfect rhyming cerenity, beautiful poem.

I never expected love to solve the world, just me.
Now it's my understanding that friendship is a collapsible thing.
It seemed we were the sun. Now I'm not your day.



"an afixiation a fix on anything the line of life the limb of a tree
the hands of he and the promise that s/he is blessed among women".
Patti Smith

Cerenity
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10 posted 2000-11-11 10:00 PM


Hi Brian,

Nice to see you, I have not seen your name of late, hope all is well with you, thank you so much for the reply, and I will be looking for you.

Love. Cerenity


"God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist.
We have to be reminded that He exist!"

(Writer Unknown)



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