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Lover of the Night |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869
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i await thee, patiently in pretense of sleep beyond deceitful curtains of lavender eyes in shadows of insomnia i cherish waking hours In pretense of false dreamscape dreams become reality bound me with your passion quench your thirst from my cup of champagne come to my lonely bed let me feel whisper breath upon my neck my slithering serpent ravish me as i lay kiss my scarlet lips raise my seductive gown let me capture your vision on my mirrored canopy of lace i want you my lover as candlelight flickers fearing if i move i will lose you forever my only lover until the dew of dawn coats the shaft of the sun and you leave me to the chilling fingers of reality all alone once more A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Oh, my!!! My ravish is ready and willing!! my cold shower is calling!!!  |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
haa...good thing i did some editing on this one deery...or it would of been deleted  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
well this one certainly made me smile...in thoughtful memory...you sure can make the temp rise ... good one ~V~ ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Thank you Wynter..so glad you enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
I carry my big old eraser with me everywhere I go... hehe... Didn't QUITE need it this time though..  |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Happiness is a Lover of the Night...James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Nan..haa..i beat you to it nan..sorry..  James..thank you ..yes she seems to be happy to me haa... ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-09-2000).] |
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Jamie Member Elite
since 2000-06-26
Posts 3168Blue Heaven |
For here I will just say. Oh My! any further reply would have to be posted in Sharon's domain Jamie Tu ne cede malis, sed contra audentior ito. - Virgil. "Yield thou not to adversity, but press on the more bravely". |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
you forgot to leave the directions Jamie ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
glad i didnt miss this one yuh good show victoria |
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insect Senior Member
since 2000-04-22
Posts 1014 |
WOW! Just love your poem Victoria  For you __________________________________ Ssssweet fountain of endless love Falling kisses from cliffs above Mist of your sweat and mine Reflect whispering colours of rainbow shine My mouth dries for your touch A longing thirst I want so much A vision of you tickles my skin My ears echo your voice within Push your fingers through my hair While imagination is made aware Of moments showing hot breath Loneliness lives its death And we swim in love's waterbed To tender shores where love is said Our bodies lift to this place and hover In this night of thirst I am your lover __________________________________ |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Walt..thank you walt..a show huh ha..glad you enjoyed.. insect..what a veryyyy nice response..thank you..im on my way to bed now and wait for my lover of the night.... ~Victoria~< !signature--> A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) [This message has been edited by Victoria (edited 11-11-2000).] |
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CocoBaci Member Elite
since 2000-05-06
Posts 3043 |
Victoria,  a touch of passion in the air tonite as always a lovely read thank you.Coco |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Victoria, Whew! you had me going there, it only gets better as do you. Be well Kethry Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
i await thee, patiently in pretense of sleep beyond deceitful curtains of lavender eyes in shadows of insomnia so beautiful!!! Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
I read this through with bated breath waiting for the ending....it doesn't really end though, it just grows and grows in a very lovely way Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Looks like its another night and I'm back again...just another lover of the night...wanted to get a fresh taste of this..James |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Coco..yes just a touch..thank you very much for visiting Coco glad you enjoyed.. Kethry..ha..well as i told deer..i did some editing.btw i didnt see what your reply was to mans point of view the other day it was deleted because of the asterisks. i didnt see jons either ..i just saw the emails.. A whispers caress..thank you for the applause haa..I appreciate that.. peppermint..thank you..yes it just grows and grows haa...  James..you can come back every night ha.. i dont care ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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