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Come.....Dance With Me
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Come.....Dance With Me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 Come with me I want to show you What lies beyond the clouds above Past the blanket of sky vast and blue I want to show you the view of love ~*~ Take my hand and hold my heart Come soar with golden wing Unite as one to never part Listen to the angels as they sing ~*~ Dance with me through the night sky Sprinkle moon dust across the night Upon moonbeams we shall fly Lost in your eyes as I hold on tight ~*~ Twirl me upon a meadow green A halo of roses to adorn my hair Afternoons spent quiet and serene Tell me...can you see us there ~*~ Kiss me in the ocean spray Running barefoot on the beach Hold me as the sun slips away I’ll never be beyond your reach ~*~ Come...let me show you love Just as it is meant to be As pure as a snow white dove Come my angel....dance with me ~*~ |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
BDC~ what a beautiful picture.....what a beautiful poem to go along so perfectly.....my favorite lines: "Kiss me in the ocean spray Running barefoot on the beach Hold me as the sun slips away I’ll never be beyond your reach" this is stunning and heart warming....can't say enough about this one  -SEA |
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Greeneyes 
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
really outstanding...so full of emotion and heart....words worth reading again, and again.....a keeper! Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
WOW! How much more beautiful can it get??? Beautifully done, butterflies  |
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Cerenity Member Elite
since 2000-02-16
Posts 2637Escondido-California |
My Beautiful Butterfly, You have made my heart believe in love that dances once again, its poetry like this that can make a soul in dipair come alive and feel theres a chance once more to enjoy the fruitages of love, such beauty you have written, thank you so very much. Love, Cerenity "God doesn't have to be reminded that we exist. We have to be reminded that He exist!" (Writer Unknown) |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
OH BABY!!!!!! my goodness me girlie-girl ... this is GORGEOUS, STUNNING, ENCHANTING, this is your best by far... you have taken your writing to the moonbeams with this one ... Holly I love this exquisite poem... every line is poetry in motion me moth wings are gonna fray flying around this ones blue glow kiss your muse for me for this one love ya me SS and luna queen me |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Sea* Thank you so much...your makin me blush!! Greeneyes* Thank you...your comments truly mean so much to me~ 'Deer* Ya sweet talker you!...Thank you  Cerenity* Thank you from the bottom of my heart...the kindness in your words overwhelms me~ JM* Who needs anyone else with you in the room...My sweet SS...my thanks to you...for simply believing in me...and sooooo much more. Love ya baby~ |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
I set this picture as my wallpaper, I was thrilled with it! I love to dance, and I loved this so much!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Oh my! This is AWESOME! It is all that has been mentioned, and then more. Truely, it makes me want to get up and dance. "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Beautiful writing Butterflies ... this was such an enchanting read. The lovely imagery is enhanced by the tenderness of these emotions. Wonderful! Best wishes, /Kit |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Kathleen* Thank you...it took my breath away too~ Eagle* I hope you dance my friend...thank you for your always kind comments~ Kit* Thank you from the bottom of my heart you are always so very sweet~ |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
BDC, I'm not much of a dancer, but for you I'd learn. I'd hold your hand as we circled beyond the clouds, listened to Angel chorus's and slid down moonbeams. And as we sat serenely quiet at the edge of the sea, I'd kiss thine soul from head to foot, and whisper what you mean to me. Dance with you my friend? Your words have turned my feet to wings...  jwesley |
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Mike Member Elite
since 1999-06-19
Posts 2462 |
Beautifully written... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
quite lovely, in all areas... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly-- every poem i read of yours i like better than the last. this is SO beautiful! you have made me see the images you speak of, and they are much more beautiful than this stunning graphic! take care sweets and dance high in the sky! love ya, amy |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Ohhhhh how beautiful and dreamy this one is. love the graphic too. Deb |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Well you know me, I'll dance anywhere, in the rain, even in the kitchen... "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Come dance with me on midnight's rainbow Come share with me,the touch of yesterday's glow The music composition of waves of in the night Songs of love rested on the wings of angels might Bluebirds will sing on the perch of mahogany style Clouds of silver promises close the gap of many a mile Windswept spray of ocean mist kissing petals of rose Blossoms of orange strengthened as love still grows ==================== Holly, this is by far your most superior piece to date and that is no easy task as there have been many, especially of late in your new found inspiration and desire to grow in the garden of your destined life. You already know that this one will be in my library but I just thought I would tell you that I now have a new favorite of yours. Beautifully penned my friend. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
JW* You have me blushing!! If this inspired you to dance though it's an honor. Thank you so much for your very kind comment Mike* It's always a pleasure to see your reply...I appreciate it very much..thank you~ Sunshine* Heartfelt thanks to you~ Amy-girl* If I believed a word of it my head would swell!! But my biased friend I thank you for your sweetness just the same Deb* Thank you so much..you are much to kind~ Eagle* If you do my dishes first....you have a deal on the kitchen dance...lol Mark* I could never hope to do your poetic reply justice...it was very very beautiful. And your praise about my recent poetry touches my heart...thank you my friend your comments mean so much to me~ |
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ThUnDeRkYsS Senior Member
since 1999-09-23
Posts 727Wisconsin |
Absolutely beautiful! This is outstanding, such a wonderful display of your loving heart, very touching to say the least  Strive for higher levels, if they seem out of reach... Grow, and they will get closer. |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
BDC this is wonderful!, the words danced through my minds eye as I read your poem. Jon |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Most perfectly beautiful....LOl, I hope that is a word....You touch me so.....Thank you for your poetry and for all the kind compliments you give to mine. Jenn E |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Holly, this is a such a sweet beckoning...I can't imagine any man resisting this. Hugs. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
TK* Thank you for the very kind compliment...I appreciate it very much~ Jon* Thank you...I'm very glad that I could bring the vision to you~ JennE* Thank you so much...and the comments that I give to you are well deserved and my pleasure~ S'en* Well we could line 'em up and try it out  Thank you my sweet friend Your comments always mean the world to me![This message has been edited by Butterflies_dont_cry (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
What a beautiful picture to go along with such a heavenly poem. Very nice Rich |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ You know I just admire the grace and beauty of your poetry ... I'm of the mind that you have been spirited away by a band of romantic muses ... and they are working their beauty through your verse. Wonderful, hon. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rich* Thank you so much~ Marge* I hope you know how much it means to me to read your kind words...and if I've been kidnapped...DON'T pay the ransom Thank you my friend..((hugs)) |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful images and well chosen words Butterflies. This is wonderfully romantic and warm and loving...very beautiful!! |
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Gemini Senior Member
since 1999-12-15
Posts 1203Wisconsin, USA |
Butterflies-I think I need to catch my breath, ok, now as for the poem, phenomenal! |
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poetic_imperfection Junior Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 45 |
Beautiful poem! Does this kind of person really exist? The kind that steals your heart and is everything one dreams. Mind, heart and soul? To belive in this poem brings my heart at ease. Just beautiful. |
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Dakota Member
since 2000-05-25
Posts 125New York |
No one has ever described it better....Just Beautiful!! |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Ethome* You're a sweetie...thank you so much~ Gemini* Always a pleasure to hear from you...thank you for reading~ poetic_imperfection* I think there is...when love is "right" anything is possible. Welcome to Passions and thank you for reading Dakota* Many thanks to you! |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, Your graphic is breathtaking my friend. LOVE IT!! It is a wonderful addition to the poem. Beautiful romantic writing. I am in awe of the new you. Stunning!  Hoping all is well with you. Take care. LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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