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To the one I love... |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! 
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For *KC* If I could be there with you now I'd give this sacred, solemn vow To hold you til the end of time Let you see I'm yours, your mine I'd give up all I have here Just to know that you are near Or walk away without refret If it meant for you sweet happiness Darling you know I love you so My love for you everyday it grows It's existense will outlast the sun Because I know you are the one The one that fills this empty heart Even when we're far apart So take this sacred vow with you Remember I'll always love you |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
very nice jeff..i love calling that special someone darling..enjoyed..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
very touching, JC---I liked this much. |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
What more can she ask for? Nicely done, Jeffrey |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
I am always envious of those who have poets for partners, what a wonderful way to hear those magic words. You did it so divinely Jeffrey. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
This is the most sincere poem I've read in a long time! Good to read something fresh from you, Jeffrey! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
A perfect expression of love! "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thanks to all of you, but most of all thanks to the one i love, for this is for her |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Jeff-- beautiful testimony to the woman that you love. what a lucky girl she is! wonderful writing from the heart! take care. amy |
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Jeffrey Carter
since 2000-04-08
Posts 2367State of constant confusion! |
Thank you Amy...This truly is from the heart |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Jeffrey, this is a beautiful declaration, I love this, I really do. I'm a push over for love I really am. It's being euphoric myself I want the whole world to be happy. Lovely work from you, really lovely. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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