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Marsha
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0 posted 2000-11-07 07:10 PM



We've Lucky We've Hit The Jackpot

The lights are set to softly gently glow
Your smile is all I need for our loves show
The moonlight bathes my skin like satin
Our movements follow their lovers' pattern
My head sinks backs against your chest
You smile, as it seems that I take a rest
Just for a moment my heart stops still
Your kisses there give me such a thrill

Fire trails follows your hands, your lips
From lovers wine we'll take frequent sips
Each tender touch fills me with desire
Lovers' flames lick our souls taking us higher
Soaring into the stars on wings of flame
We dance delightedly in this lovers' game
The heat that sears our lovers' heart
Binds us together for us never to part

Blessed am I to experience this joy divine
To know that I am yours as you are mine
Passion this wild and yet totally free
Is only possible when you're with me
Passion without love is not for us to seek
Into true beauty we've taken a little peek
Love so strong and passion so hot
We're lucky we've struck the jackpot


Marsha

(Not a Mushy Marsha one)

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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-08-2000).]

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-07 07:41 PM


Ok how about Sexy Marsha with this one ........"Passion this wild and yet totally free
Is only possible when you're with me"

I love this.....but then, you KNEW I would!   Very sexy sweet friend....enjoyed this..... -SEA

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2 posted 2000-11-07 09:20 PM


Hello MM...somehow I knew I wasn't going to see $$$ signs here...whew!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



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3 posted 2000-11-07 11:17 PM


A *BUMP* for Marsha  
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4 posted 2000-11-08 04:43 AM


SEA ( Circe, ) I did know love, I surely did. This comes straight from my ............ um deep within my soul. Inspired by my man, naturally enough. Thank you my friend, I'm very pleased, oh and I'm glad you like this too.
Take care love
               Mushy
                


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Marsha
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5 posted 2000-11-08 04:54 AM


Kari, I'm sorry I didn't mean to hit submit yet, now I just wonder what or even where my mind is this morning. Yes you are very likely right. Thank you love, and yes you were quite right, whom needs £'s or $'s when love and passion are around. I'm richer by far, money couldn't take me to the places in our souls that my man does. He takes me to dine in heaven, my soul is served lovers wine and ambrosia. Angels play soft music and the stars shine just for us. And when we've finished dining he wraps me in passions flames and we dance in loves own flames, as an encore.
Take care love
               Majestic Mushy Marsha
                
Circe, thank you for the bump
                
        


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Kit McCallum
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6 posted 2000-11-08 06:31 AM


What a powerful love you've depicted here Marsha ... desire, longing and passion flow beautifully through these lines ... a wonderful romantic rendering!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

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7 posted 2000-11-08 11:01 AM


Kit, thank you love, I appreciate it. you know I do. I'm glad you like this one, it is rather special to me.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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8 posted 2000-11-08 11:20 AM


marsha--

beautiful poem...tis a wonderful thing
when love and lust collide together, the
best of both worlds. i am so happy for you
sweets. take care!

~amy~  

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9 posted 2000-11-08 12:55 PM


Amy, hi love, Thank you so much sweetie, you are so right. And I know you're 'happy' at the moment, it is wonderful isn't it. Being so full of love you want the whole world to rejoice as well. (Well I do, and I expect you do simply because you have an unselfish heart.) As we say around here, 'aint love grand  
Take care and look after yourself
        Mushy
                                     
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-08-2000).]

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