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Moonlight Whispers -- inspired by the sequel #2
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Moonlight Whispers -- inspired by the sequel #2 |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song 
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 Moonlight Whispers In the moonlight we find our destined dance Resting in the winds of two lover's chance Breezes of sensuous nature soon to take hold As this true friendship's story begins to unfold A walk in the innocense of midnight's chime A whisper sent through the bluegrass of time Time over eternity will be set to our own pace Until the time we are able to dance face to face Two hands entwined in the light of Autumn's moon Cupping the tender moments of winter to come soon Tingles of sensations find fingertips in passionate haste Two hearts finding love within the lips of tender taste Rush not where tiptoe's silence is much better spent Seek not the meaning of what is surely heaven sent Hair flowing in the breezes of this chill kissed night As warmth is found in the eyes of true love's might Mark Bohannan |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
what a loving setting..and this poem is my favorite so far Mark..very beautiful..  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Rainydays Member
since 2000-10-21
Posts 324 |
It is beautiful, Mark. It has a delicate, almost hushed sense of togetherness, of discovery. "Rush not where tiptoe's silence is much better spent Seek not the meaning of what is surely heaven sent" ~~ I find these lines especially lovely. Thank you for sharing this one here...I'm sure everyone will love it as much as I do. Rainydays |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Mark, so glad to see you, AND your passionate pen at work again... this will be a keeper for all time for many, many poetic hopefuls... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
You always do your best weaving under Luna's glow my friend...this is beautiful and filled with the tenderness that rests in those moonlit whispers~ |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Mark- this is so beautiful. i love it. 'rush not where tiptoe's silence is much better spent seek not the meaning of what is surely heaven sent' these lines...as well as all the others... are just wonderful. i feel this one, my sweet friend. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend, this is so soft and tender, utterly beautiful, I adore this one, I truly do. Such a superb turn of phrase, Oh I really love this. Stunning work. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Kit McCallum
Administrator
Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774Ontario, Canada |
Ahhh Mark, so good to see you back, though only gone a brief while. This is truly lovely, so many beautiful sentiments woven through these lines ... what a soft and romantic picture you've painted ... Best wishes, /Kit |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Time over eternity will be set to our own pace Until the time we are able to dance face to face Two hands entwined in the light of Autumn's moon Cupping the tender moments of winter to come soon Tingles of sensations find fingertips in passionate haste Two hearts finding love within the lips of tender taste =============== poetry in motion Mark ... perfectly describes the intensity between two who desire to make these discoveries ... and of course you dress is up in your gift for painting us the scene with the imagery your write my heart in this one ...but then you already know that love ya when your inspired my poetice friend  me |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Mark~ you keep touching my heart like this and my husband is gonna get jealous..... *SIGH* this is so soft and gentle.....romantic.......so romantic......leaving invisible fingerprints across my heart....wonderful sweetie.  -SEA |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Two hands entwined in the light of Autumn's moon Cupping the tender moments of winter to come soon Tingles of sensations find fingertips in passionate haste Two hearts finding love within the lips of tender taste you have captures such beautiful intimate moments with this. I applaud you. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
this is so beautiful.....and soooo romantic, and as always superb.... I am glad that I was able to come in today, and found this one....*sigh*....wish that I had more time, to read and reply on all the wonderful work from the poets inhere....but can't come in as much as I want... ((hugs)) Charisma |
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BloomingRose Member Elite
since 2000-08-09
Posts 3092Florida |
Mark, A truly beautiful picture you paint with flowing romantic poetic words. Simply beautiful! Deb |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
Mark, So lovely is this whisper of moonlight. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'In the moonlight we find our destined dance Resting in the winds of two lover's chance Breezes of sensuous nature soon to take hold As this true friendship's story begins to unfold' Wow, Mark! You've done it YET again. But, am I surprised? Not in the least. Absolutely beautiful write, my friend, and now it's in competition for my favorite!! sp  I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me... |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Oh, Mark.....this is wonderfully written and I really love the graphic!! Exceptional!!  Follow your dream! |
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Interloper
since 2000-11-06
Posts 8369Deep in the heart |
As warmth is found in the eyes of true love's might ================ gr8 personification. Good show. |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Mark, a break has done wonders for you and your work ... not that either needed help. Each time I read your work I think this is the best, then along comes the next one. I couldn't pick fav lines as they paint such lovely pictures in my mind's eye. Well done, once again. To quote SEA "sigh". Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Mark, this is very romantic and flowing. How did you know I wanted to sit under the moonlight tonight? Sandra |
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compassion Member
since 2000-11-01
Posts 135USA |
Mark, as usual, you have given us a beautiful ongoing lovers agenda with real romatic notions. A lovely read. |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
MarkB~ 'A walk in the innocense of midnight's chime A whisper sent through the bluegrass of time Time over eternity will be set to our own pace Until the time we are able to dance face to face' My favorite lines ~ and I don't have to say why. Love it - and you, sweet man. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Greeneyes
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
sigh, sigh, sigh.......*S* reminds me of many nights sitting under moonlight, on the beach, which as of late has become my peace.....ramble, ramble....thank you.... Greeneyes "Within you I lose myself Without you I find myself Wanting to be lost again." -Unknown |
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Rosebud1229 Senior Member
since 2000-04-05
Posts 1813North Carolina |
this was very romantic, loved every line. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Thank you all so very much. I am sorry to do one group reply and you all know that I very seldom do that, but my computer time is so limited right now. I will always try to spred my replies around as much as possible until I get back in force and I do thank you all so very much for your continued support of me in my lack of time here in Passions. This one was inspired as a sequel to one that I was very much inspired by and I do really appreciate all the individual comments to it. I am in awe as to some of the responses to it, and I promise to always try to excel in my poetry and you all are very good reasons to do so. Once again, many many thanks to you all. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Beautiful work Mark very tender and very creative....great read all the way through... some really great metaphors and right full of lots of heart....tale care ...ethome..... |
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Jenn E Senior Member
since 2000-08-02
Posts 589Kelowna, BC, Canada |
Mark, You amaze me you konw.......All you write is written with the most tender heart.....beautiful writing..... Jenn E |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Well, I get sick one day and I miss the best ones! How lovely. "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Mark my friend had to come back to this, I could do with some beautiful images tonight, and this is ideal. I've actually printed this out and it's on our message board, and it's beautiful it truly is. Except that of course the printed image doesn't move, it's perfect. Maybe having it directly in front of Daphnie will stop her hogging an extra screen, but I doubt it. This is a stunning piece it really is. Love it loads. Take care Mushy Marsha < !signature-->Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning [This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-08-2000).] |
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