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snowpants
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0 posted 2000-11-06 10:21 PM


The wind blows about
Like a cyclone--
Feels as if
I could fly away.
The waves crash ashore--
Think I could go back with them?
The stars light the black sky;
The clouds run quickly from the moon.
I don't know, Love,
It's just so complicated
Sometimes.
There's nothing simple
About this emotion;
When it comes to Love,
All sense of logic is lost.
I don't know what to say
When cornered;
I tend to break
When pushed to the limit.
I want to endure,
But my spirit is spent.
The wind of solitude blows
While the waves of temptation
Continue to call my name.
Though I'm inclined
To flee the face of crisis,
I don't want to be alone.
I would reach for the moon,
But the clouds just jeer,
Reminding me
My goal is unattainable.
Meanwhile, the stars,
Shining brilliantly,
Encourage and motivate,
Declaring I can do anything.
Dear Love,
Everyone says different things--
Remind me
Of the only thing that matters.


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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SEA
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1 posted 2000-11-06 10:30 PM


SP~
"While the waves of temptation
Continue to call my name"

ooohhhh....I really like the way this made me feel....Excellent poem!   -SEA

Daniel J D
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since 2000-10-01
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2 posted 2000-11-06 10:41 PM


Snowpants,
This is so beautiful and full of genuine emotions. I just love your poems. Remember though, I do listen.

"The wind of solitude blows
While the waves of temptation
Continue to call my name.
Though I'm inclined
To flee the face of crisis,
I don't want to be alone".

Respond to my call and let the waves of my heart fill your life with the wonders of love
(Daniel J D)

snowpants
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3 posted 2000-11-06 11:01 PM


SEA:  glad you enjoyed it!  Thanks for stopping by!!  

Daniel:  you are one sweet man, you know that??  Thanks for your kind words!!  

sp  

I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

Aimster
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since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297
Charlotte, NC
4 posted 2000-11-07 12:11 PM


Kris--

girl, you are on FIRE!!  
this one took my breath away...you may not
think so but your work is lovely dear. each
poem you write i know comes from your
heart and your soul. so now YOU know that I
KNOW and i certainly do relate! keep holding
on...love will find it's way to you. and
that's a promise babe.

your friend,
amy   p.s u got some wahter?? lol..

snowpants
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5 posted 2000-11-07 06:00 PM


awww.  you are too kind, Aims.  you're making me blush.
but, really, thank you for your wonderful comments, my friend!!  they are truly appreciated!

sp  
p.s.
you have to go to Walmart and hug the people first, then you can have some wawter.  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

snowpants
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6 posted 2000-11-07 06:04 PM



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