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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-06 06:05 PM


Calm My Raging Currents…


Come to my water’s edge
to hear the beckoning of
my lapping on the shore,
as I am perpetually
reaching for you.

Gaze into me and see
the reflection of your soul,
and you will catch a
glimpse of mine.

Wade in me and calm
my raging currents to stop
this treacherous course.
Dive to the very depths
of me and discover
the mystery that is me.




Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

© Copyright 2000 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-11-06 06:33 PM


A beautiful poem, flowing. A calm cme over me as I finished reading it. Very nice. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Interloper
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Member Rara Avis
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Deep in the heart
2 posted 2000-11-06 06:46 PM


Why would one want to calm your raging currents when it produces such 1derful poetry?  Certainly not I!

Love is.

A Whisper's Caress
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3 posted 2000-11-06 07:01 PM


Ron,
Thank you for your
generous reply. I love this site
and hope to spend alot of time here.
Everyone is so nice.

Interloper,
Thank you, I am happy you enjoyed this.
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Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

[This message has been edited by A Whisper's Caress (edited 11-06-2000).]

SEA
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with you
4 posted 2000-11-06 07:06 PM


AWC~

"Gaze into me and see
the reflection of your soul,
and you will catch a
glimpse of mine."


This is so powerful.......I LOVE it!   -SEA

A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale
5 posted 2000-11-06 10:20 PM


Sea,
thank you,  I am happy you enjoyed it.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

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