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0 posted 2000-11-06 04:30 PM


.............That old familiar ache of wanting you......

I know it
as I do my own skin
that burn of desire
so deep within

Flowing through my veins
with a life all it's own
this ache for you........
like nothing I've ever known

Just one thought of you
brings this ache to sharp pain
and I wait for you to touch me.......
to love me......once again.

-SEA-


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1 posted 2000-11-06 04:35 PM


You think it's a virus?  LOL...something must be going around...geez...

Thanks SEA, not just for this lovely verse, but for all of your comforting words of late.

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2 posted 2000-11-06 04:36 PM


So, how far are you from Kentucky my sweet friend?  I will be more than happy to let these lips touch you anytime.  A poem to stir my thoughts tonight huh?  You little wonderful rascal you.  
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3 posted 2000-11-06 04:46 PM


Serenity~ It must be.....forget the flu shot we need one for this virus lol  You are such a sweetheart, you don't have to thank me for caring about you *hugs*

Mark~ baby, too far...much too far.......stir just your thoughts.....hhhmmmmmm.......I'll have to try harder   sighs and hugs  

-SEA

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4 posted 2000-11-06 04:49 PM


you write with passion, SEA
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MA~ thank you very much   -SEA
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6 posted 2000-11-06 05:07 PM


Okay, so maybe more than just your thoughts my sweet friend.....but do I NEED to say that?  I am sure by now that you already know don't you?LOL  Yes, I am sure you do.
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7 posted 2000-11-06 05:10 PM


Mark~ you don't Really NEED to say...but UGH..I LOVE to hear your sweet whispers.......and yes, I know......as you know........
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8 posted 2000-11-06 05:14 PM


SEA, you have captured the yearning so passionately, and as always, the pleasure is mine to have read your rhyme

Coco

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9 posted 2000-11-06 05:19 PM


Ah, the words I could whisper in your ear. The love I'd share, the touch I'd give...

Oops!!  My wife says to take it back, but I won't, I just won't...ouch, OUCH I SAID.

I still won't...now that she's walked out (hee, hee).

Wonderful my friend...couldn't have done it better.

jwesley

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10 posted 2000-11-06 05:21 PM


i can feel the yearning Sea in your poem..
nicely penned..

                  ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


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11 posted 2000-11-06 05:26 PM


Coco~ thank you so much!  

JWesley~ that's ok babe......whisper...I'm listening....besides I'm very married so I'm safe to tease with   touch....touch.....touch  

Victoria~ glad you liked  

-SEA

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12 posted 2000-11-06 05:29 PM


PSSSSST.....come here baby...lend me that sweet ear of yours...."whispering"--{!!@@!**@*!*@*&!&*&!!&&&*^%~~ *%^%&}  Will that do my sweet friend?  Think you can sleep comfortably in all of that.....after you catch your breath of course.
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13 posted 2000-11-06 05:34 PM


Hey, SEA, I've got about 3 achers down here in Florida I'll share with ya!!

This is really,er, stimulating...MORE!

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14 posted 2000-11-06 05:40 PM


Mark~ my ear is on fire!! Love what you do with that talented tongue of yours.......

Balladeer~ I lived in Florida for 3 months, I love it there....are you by Panama City? If so, I'm packing!!  

-SEA

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15 posted 2000-11-06 05:52 PM


Sea,
I loved every word of this, but I am
laughing so hard at the replies I can t come up with anything more creative then that.
Very beautiful read.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

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16 posted 2000-11-06 05:56 PM


AWC~ thank you very much....lol you just jump in and tease......it's lots of fun..no one is left out......you just have fun!   -SEA
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17 posted 2000-11-06 06:01 PM


oh yeah baby...{*& %##~~**&#@@@+++p~~AND OF COURSE......*&&*^* %*^$$
   }

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18 posted 2000-11-06 06:01 PM


SEA....gimmee a week! I'll move there!!!!!
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19 posted 2000-11-06 06:04 PM


That's desire gone wild in the Sea I can hear the waves of desire rolling in.....just one thought was a hot one whew!!
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20 posted 2000-11-06 06:14 PM


Mark~ Ohhhhhh baby I love what you're sayin'   You are so much fun.....I sure missed you!

Balladeer~ LOL love it......maybe I can just come play on the beaches there with you?!

Ethome~
Deep within the SEA you will find desire
a passion burning ~ endless and deep
with a love so powerful
it will make you weep

-SEA

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21 posted 2000-11-06 07:12 PM


SEA, wonderful love, this is a dream and you knew I'd love it, I know sooooooo predictable. (I'm not really I'm not, I can be very surprising)
           Watch out!
OH the Porters after much discussion and loads of vetos from me. Some of their suggestions were very strange, even for porters. They Have decided on fan fare please

OSCAR
which stands for Our SEA Cares And Responds
told you they were weird didn't I. So I'll get David to take this down to them tomorrow, may god have mercy on him.
Take care
                 Mushy
          and don't say I didn't warn you  
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Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning


[This message has been edited by Marsha (edited 11-07-2000).]

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22 posted 2000-11-06 07:18 PM


Mushy~ OSCAR couldn't be cuter!!! Love it!  
and yes, my sweet mushy hearted friend, I knew as you know and I thank you kindly   Tell the Porters that they ROCK!!  -SEA

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23 posted 2000-11-06 07:19 PM


This poem is full of that longing desire, the want in capital letters...the desire screams out! great one...And I see mark is back to safeguard you. Good work Mark.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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24 posted 2000-11-06 07:23 PM


RonK~ that's ok......I still have kisses for you **SMOOCH**   -SEA
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25 posted 2000-11-06 07:27 PM


SEA~
Oh what a beautiful want....this is so very sensual and just simply beautiful to read.
Well penned my friend  
Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



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26 posted 2000-11-06 08:34 PM


What strong emotion I get from this poem... I have felt this way many times before, and you put it into poetry SO eloquently!

Azure
"I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros

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27 posted 2000-11-06 08:49 PM


Sea-babes you already know I relate to this one WAY TOO MUCH...
me now infamous 3 am ache is well documented in the blue pages...
and under my skin...
sometimes me glows in the dark  
loved this one...dont ya know...
yes you know
later-you scratch my itch-Ill scratch yours gator hehehe
jm

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28 posted 2000-11-06 08:54 PM


Lovely! You do this so very well.

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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29 posted 2000-11-06 09:25 PM


Whew, I know the exact thing you are talking about here. Such a hard thing to ignore, isn't it? This is a beauty of a poem.
(So why don't all the men write those things to me, hm??)
Sandra

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30 posted 2000-11-11 02:03 AM


A simple WOW is all I can formulate; I'm still blown away!!!  

Pepper
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31 posted 2000-11-11 02:11 AM


SEA, obviously I've been missing this side of you. and its a mighty fine exposed side. show me more....  

Parker

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32 posted 2000-11-11 09:52 AM


all these fun responses - can't take away from the fact that this is a most beautiful most sensuous poem - and it goes in my box
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33 posted 2000-11-13 05:23 AM


Circe, finally OSCAR has finally given me their replies. (Now didn't I tell you they were slow   )
The trouble is I understand that they are so rarely all on together. So I've been down to their little lodge and grabbed what I can. Okay here we go.

Wonderful, thanks SEA     Dave P
Love this                 Pete
GREAT                     Si
Love it                   Les
Terrific                  Big Dave
Good Poem Great work      Martin
Brilliant                 Barry
Super Poem                Brian
Like this one             Steve
Good start to the day     Steve B
I like this one           David S
Cool like this one        Jon
Great                     Rick
Terrific poem             Rich

Circe you must excuse their short replies, but I told them to keep it short and clean  
They send you a huge cheer, and they really mean it.
Take care
                 Mushy
                    


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

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34 posted 2000-11-13 02:34 PM


Tracie~ thank you so much  

Azure~ that made me feel SO good, thank you  

Janet~ yes, I know you know dear heart......that ache is like no other......I hear ya...

Eagle One~ thank you very much!  

Sandra~ I'm glad you liked this  

P35~ Thank you, always so nice to me  

Parker~ Hey handsome! Come here.......I'll show you more  

WY~ wow, what can I say? Thank you!  

Oscar~
DaveP,Pete,Si,Les,Big Dave,Martin,Barry,Brian,Steve, SteveB,David S, Jon,Rick, Rich.......boys, you've made my day! Thank you all so much   Hugs for each of you!  

-SEA

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35 posted 2000-11-13 02:40 PM


pssst...hey SEA?  Just me...I liked this...hope you can hear it over the clamoring of all the guys here...OK, I've got to leave now...shhh...bye...

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, than speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ




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