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A Nice Little Package - something to put a smile on your face!
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A Nice Little Package - something to put a smile on your face! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia 
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A Nice Little Package < !signature-->He may be small in stature but many would have him if they could. Every thing’s where it should be and, oh boy, is it good! Eyes that spark with a fire that could melt the hardest hearts. A smile that lights up the room which seems to dull when he departs. Broad shoulders and strong chest, with a soft place for your head. Firm and supple body that fits yours when you’re lying close in bed. Encircled by a tender embrace in arms made for holding you. Caressed by hands strong enough to break a heart in two. Old enough, but still young enough to teach a thing or two, but you wonder what could happen if he got hold of you.  I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 11-06-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Hmmmm If he got ahold of me???? Two words for you.....DUCT TAPE!!! He'd never escape..lol I enjoyed this Dee...thanks for the  |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Broad shoulders and strong chest, with a soft place for your head. Firm and supple body that fits yours when you’re lying close in bed. Encircled by a tender embrace in arms made for holding you. Caressed by hands strong enough to break a heart in two. ================= oooh baby.... tie it all up with a bow and bring it on..lol you got my shopping list covered here... this is so cute Dee,...hope ya get to open your package soon great to see you here posting take care jm |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
so many thoughts going thru my head haa.. i would probably slip right thru his fingers with all those bubbles all over me  ~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Kethry Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-29
Posts 9082Victoria Australia |
Dee, with a package like that, I'd even pay C.O.D. . Neatly packaged poem.Be well Kethry. Growth demands a temporary surrender of security. Gail Sheehy |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
I too, would be more worried for him!!! A nice little package? I'm one of those that just RIPS EM OPEN!!! None of that fold the paper, save the bows crap for me!! ROFL... This one was fun, dee!!! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Butterflies - I'm sure Rowan is no stranger to duct tape ... he's a maintenence man! JM - I wrote this for a friend of mine who's name is also Janet. This is very much like her birthday wish list but don't think her fella would agree to getting it for her. Victoria - Bubbles. lol I won't be able to look at Rowan again and keep a straight face. Kethry - At least COD would be cheap to send him down to you. serenity - so you're not so serene, hey? Thanks all, glad you liked it. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Dee, this is without a doubt the nicest tribute anyone has ever written for me! I am humbled..... |
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SEA 
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Member Seraphic
since 2000-01-18
Posts 22676with you |
Dee~ forget the duct tape!! I'm thinking SUPER GLUE!!!!!! Hubba Hubba!  Fantastic poem! -SEA |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Glad you liked it Sir 'Deer, but I thought I had hidden the subject so well! Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
SEA - Works for me! Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Unfortunately Balladeer, that was after I left...haw-de-haw! Enjoyed this much,Dee, it was indeed "a nice little package". jwesley |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Don't ever leave him never let him go....he's going to be hard to replace in this crazy world...as far as the ending goes it's not going to affect me too much but I enjoyed the read very much ....very nice indeed!!! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
jwesley - glad you enjoyed. It was written to give a friend a laugh, looks like it has done that! ethome - I'm afraid he's just a friend so I can't have him, but the friendship is worth hanging on to. Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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Highlander Member
since 2000-11-06
Posts 50Dundee, Scotland |
Someone is very fortunate! |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Highlander - Someone is very lucky ... and it's not me!  Thanks for stopping by and reading. Dee< !signature--> I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand [This message has been edited by Dee (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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Auguste
since 2000-02-16
Posts 3953By the sea |
Hi Dee, Thought I'd stop by for a minute and am now glad I did. Great read and well done, my dear friend. Be happy, Michael Proust- "Love is space and time measured by the heart" |
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Dee Member Elite
since 2000-08-19
Posts 2330Queensland, Australia |
Michael, my friend, nice to see you here! Thanks for checking out my poem. Glad you liked it. Love, Dee I wish you every happiness and pray you'll always have the best of the good things in life. a brand |
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