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What is this I feel?
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What is this I feel? |
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kelly bo bottoms Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 17 |
Darkness covers the light I long to see your face I long to feel your warmth Nothing matters now Days turn into nights Your not here I long for your love But it is gone Gone like the stir of echoes in my dreams But was it ever there? I felt your touch I know it was real Why does it go as quickly as it came? I feel the wind touch my face The kiss of goodbye My heart feels nothing now I am numb Feel the warmth of the sun on my face I am happy for the moment Time heals the soul How I long for time I wish I could feel again |
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Greeneyes  
since 2000-09-09
Posts 9903In Your Poetic Mind |
that longing for time to heal the soul, know this feeling all too well....in hopes that time will heal....*s* Greeneyes |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Very well said... I feel the wind touch my face The kiss of goodbye and your wish... Time heals the soul How I long for time I wish I could feel again we've all been through this. nice read.(but sad) Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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The Poetic Plumber Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 38 |
Very well written poem. It had the perfect ending. Every aspect of our life revolves around time. Roger |
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azure Member
since 2000-10-16
Posts 52 |
Oh, wow have I BEEN there... you really know how to pour out that emotion of loss. What a great poem, here's hoping those wounds will heal quickly. Azure "I put it down on paper and then the ghost does not ache so much" - Sandra Cisneros |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
Very well put! I like the, "Gone like the stir of echoes in my dreams," line. It is a strange feeling after you've been through a lot and you don't know how feel.....good poem!!... ethome |
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kelly bo bottoms Junior Member
since 2000-11-05
Posts 17 |
Thanks for the warm responses- this helps my healing.  **Kelly** |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
lotsa questions miss bo bottoms me likes where yur going with this sis yuh |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
Gone like the stir of echoes in my dreams But was it ever there? I felt your touch I know it was real Why does it go as quickly as it came? I feel the wind touch my face The kiss of goodbye ============ this is a sad but very beautiful poem your express your emotions well... welcome to Passions, I look forward to more of your work take care jm |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
KellyBo~ Some lovely lines in here - 'Why does it go as quickly as it came? I feel the wind touch my face The kiss of goodbye' Oooohhh ... yes. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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