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kelly bo bottoms
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since 2000-11-05
Posts 17


0 posted 2000-11-05 07:35 PM




what is love
is it real
or is it something we only imagine?

can it heal our pain
or does it just make pain
masked by our reality of it

do we lie in wonder of it all
controlled by emotions
trying to make sense

I've thought of you
felt your touch
knew you before
in a dream

Is it real?
walking in a dream-like state
I feel you.....see you
but your not there

Is this the way it will be?

Your here, but I'm not
You talk, but I dont hear
Is this the way it will be?

There is no way out
Haunted by things of the past
Feelings unsaid
Wonders unknown
Is this the way it will be?

Yearning for happiness
Wash away the sadness
Your smile is just a tear away
Is this the way it will be?

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wayoutwalt
Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
1 posted 2000-11-05 07:41 PM


kelly you keep writing and posting lil i mean big sis woohoo love seeing you here and nice job
Ron K. Fox
Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

2 posted 2000-11-05 08:37 PM


I can relate to this. Very good. You are making a good entrance today. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


snowpants
Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
3 posted 2000-11-05 09:21 PM


'I've thought of you
felt your touch
knew you before
in a dream'

Nice write, kelly!  Liked it a lot!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

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