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Ron K. Fox
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0 posted 2000-11-05 06:15 PM


I notice a blush of pink on soft flesh
Cupping you tenderly I bring you to me
Lips locking on delicate skin
A slight pressure causes sweet nectar to flow
Trickling down the corners of my mouth
To drip from my chin
And deep within the honey flesh
I find the core of desires
Within is the pit, the heart of the fruit
A treasure within a treasure
Lips and tongue tenderly pry at it
Teeth nibbling carefully tease its bordering flesh
With each taste thick sweet syrup flows
Slowly, patiently, playfully,
I set you free
And then I will plant you within a warm bed
Blanket you with care,
And tend you as you grow strength again
Ready to blossom and fruit
Once ripened
I will devour you again



[This message has been edited by Ron K. Fox (edited 11-05-2000).]

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Alle'cram
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1 posted 2000-11-05 06:26 PM


Hi Ron,
  This is soo sensual yet tender. Wonderful write. Peach just happens to be my favorite fruit. Enjoyed.   Love,  Marcy

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2 posted 2000-11-05 06:28 PM


Yes. That is my favorite fruit also, and you have described enjoyment of it in a great way. I once attempted to do the same thing. Yours is much better than mine, let me assure you.  

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3 posted 2000-11-05 06:42 PM


a succulent poem indeed ron..

               ~Victoria~


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Rainydays
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4 posted 2000-11-05 08:12 PM


Ron, you've done this very well. Cleverly suggestive, remarkably innocent. Delectable reading.

Rainydays

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5 posted 2000-11-05 08:36 PM


RonFox~
You made my craving for peaches even stronger.
What a delicious render.
~*Marge*~


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