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kelly bo bottoms
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since 2000-11-05
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0 posted 2000-11-05 03:53 PM



I am but a wounded flower
battered
bruised  
lost
with no direction to grow
  


my soul longs for rejoicing
thine tender mercies
no more tears

© Copyright 2000 kelly bo bottoms - All Rights Reserved
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
1 posted 2000-11-05 03:57 PM


It seems like when we are happy sadness is just around the corner
so surely when we are sad happiness must be just around the corner...yes...James

Denise
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since 1999-08-22
Posts 22648

2 posted 2000-11-05 03:59 PM


Welcome to Passions, Kelly! Life can sure beat us up at times. We all long for the tears to dry. This is a lovely poem! Please check your email for a special welcome from Passions!

Denise

kelly bo bottoms
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since 2000-11-05
Posts 17

3 posted 2000-11-05 04:09 PM


Thank you guys. I am so happy to be here!!

[This message has been edited by kelly bo bottoms (edited 11-05-2000).]

wayoutwalt
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since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870
TEXAS (it's all big)
4 posted 2000-11-05 04:11 PM


I am kelly's real life adopted big bro oops i meant lil bro we decided one day back in 97 that we had to be siblings yuh and i am so glad she decided to post she is one of two i have been trying to get here!!! kkk kelly nice first post welcmes to passions yuh yuh yuh
Sunshine
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since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354
Listening to every heart
5 posted 2000-11-05 04:39 PM


Kelly, welcome to Passions...and WOW...thanks for showing her the way!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Marge Tindal
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since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384
Florida's Foreverly Shores
6 posted 2000-11-05 04:41 PM


KellyBo~
Welcome to Passions !
Nice entrance.
We're so glad to have you here.

*Walt~
Way to go ... thanks for the invite for Kelly !

~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

vandana
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since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463
USA
7 posted 2000-11-05 05:00 PM


Welcome to passions!!!!!!enjoyed it!!!!!!!!
Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

8 posted 2000-11-05 05:12 PM


welcome kelly...nice entrance...you'll fit in wonderfully...and kudos to you walt for getting her here

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Kit McCallum
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Member Laureate
since 2000-04-30
Posts 14774
Ontario, Canada
9 posted 2000-11-05 05:16 PM


Welcome to Passions Kelly!  What an expressive first post ... I'm looking forward to reading more of your work!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Irish Rose
Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263

10 posted 2000-11-05 05:18 PM


Welcome to Passions!  May I say this is deep poetry.  Heart poetry. Keep writing. It's wonderful to read something so refreshinging honest and versed.

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



snowpants
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since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061
KS
11 posted 2000-11-05 06:01 PM


Welcome to Passions!  Great poem, kelly!!

sp  


I won't go, I won't sleep, I can't breathe until you're resting here with me...

jwesley
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563
Spring, Texas
12 posted 2000-11-05 06:05 PM


Welcome HOME Kelly, to our house of friends.
Wonderful way to start too, look forward to more  from you.

Yeah, WOW, you too...for enticing her.

jwesley



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