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Brent Hotchkin
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since 2000-02-15
Posts 42
Florida,USA

0 posted 2000-11-04 09:16 PM


Light Of Life

Light is a substance
that comes from above.
It brightens our world
and lets us see doves.
But who puts it there?
and brightens our souls.
He's often forgotten
but everyone knows.
He allows us to live
and hopes that we give.
It's all in our hearts
It's all in our minds.
But the doing and sharing
is how we are kind.
We know what to do
we know how to do it.
It's just up to us
how we go through it.

Paula Jean Hotchkin
11/13/1956-10/27/2000


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Ron K. Fox
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since 2000-10-24
Posts 925

1 posted 2000-11-04 09:18 PM


What a beautiful inspirational poem, and a fitting tribute of recognition. Thank you for sharing that special poem. Be well. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


inot2B
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since 2000-09-18
Posts 2205
Arkansas
2 posted 2000-11-04 09:23 PM


Your poem has a beautiful message.  
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3 posted 2000-11-04 09:27 PM


Brent~
This is a lovely tribute to one who lit up your life.
The glow will remain in your memories.
*Hugs*
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733
Michigan
4 posted 2000-11-04 09:30 PM


And there is no brighter light is there...
Excellent thought and great work~

Denise
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5 posted 2000-11-04 11:16 PM


This is very inspirational and a touching tribute, Brent.

Denise

Alle'cram
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since 2000-02-28
Posts 1816
Texas
6 posted 2000-11-05 03:21 AM


Brent, This is a beautiful poem. I was so impressed with this piece I looked for more of your work and found a goldmine (although, to few).  Really liked your "black book", I relate and do the same thing. Enjoyed. Marcy
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