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When She Comes Around.......
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When She Comes Around....... |
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Sunshine
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart 
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When She Comes Around you will know her then, she will stroke your heart in such a soft, unspoken way, 'tis her way of art then know you, in an instant rare and sublime she will remain softly there, there, for all of time… with her gentle gasp, you shall deliquesce within shall you shiver slightly, you'll find welcoming from the warmth of her hand, a whisper of her sigh you will want to lay nigh her, through the bye and bye this gentle spirit, this blessing of most virtuous light comes into your inner world, making all things right comes to you without question, comes to you with love you hardly challenge God's will, come from high above… speak you now, and softly so "stay with me, and never go…" Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Kari, this is astoundingly brilliant. Utterly beautiful, truly an exquisite poem. I love this one, and this is now my favourite. Oh this is breathtaking. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Karilea~ So very soft and pretty. Loaded with lots of yummy thoughts. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
with her gentle gasp, you shall deliquesce within shall you shiver slightly, you'll find welcoming from the warmth of her hand, a whisper of her sigh you will want to lay nigh her, through the bye and bye A beautiful image you have created here. stunning. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Balladeer
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
Karilea...I love it when you get down to some great writing....like this |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
it should be just like this. . . always. . . words escape me right now Karilea. . . beautiful. . . just beautiful. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
So soft and delicate...this is truly beautiful weaving~ |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Marsha, you are an avid reader, and I appreciate you! Thank you... Marge...yummmm.... Ron, stunning is a wonderful word... 'Deer, maybe some day I'll do good...hey? {~,^}....thank you!... Sven, knowing that this left you speechless is a wonderful feeling.... BDC, exactly what I was hoping for, thank you... Karilea If I whisper, will you listen?... I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound. KRJ |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Karilea-- wow! this left me speechless. this was so moving and serene. yet the message in it somehow powerful. how ya do it?  excellent poem! take care. Amy  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
Sunshine,your poetry always gives me a smile!! |
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jwesley Member Rara Avis
since 2000-04-30
Posts 7563Spring, Texas |
Wonderful Sunshine...as usual. Read it several times to snuggle into the fit. jwesley [This message has been edited by jwesley (edited 11-07-2000).] |
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