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Beki
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0 posted 2000-11-04 04:13 PM


Squirrels scatter
rustle gold and crimson leaves
autumn wind whispers.

© Copyright 2000 Rebecca Reese - All Rights Reserved
SpitFire
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1 posted 2000-11-04 04:15 PM


~Mm,...enjoyed this, you've captured it beautifully. Take care now. *Peace.
2dalimit
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2 posted 2000-11-04 04:52 PM


Good one.

I had a FALL day.
I fell face down on the ground.
Nose bleed and leaves.


Melton

Beki
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3 posted 2000-11-04 05:11 PM



Sunshine
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4 posted 2000-11-04 05:47 PM


Beki, charming read!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



Lakewalker
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5 posted 2000-11-04 06:46 PM


Nicely done

"Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!!

tracie66
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6 posted 2000-11-04 06:51 PM


lovely read Beki...well done

Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



EagleOne
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7 posted 2000-11-05 01:49 AM


Nice! "autumn wind whispers" I do love that line, well done!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

Beki
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8 posted 2000-11-05 05:11 AM


Thanks  to all for reading, I appreciate your comments  
Beki
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9 posted 2000-11-05 03:39 PM


shamelessly pushing myself up for more comment....
Victoria
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10 posted 2000-11-05 03:42 PM


very nice beki..i love squirrels in the autumn especially..Enjoyed..

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


kaile
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11 posted 2000-11-16 06:46 PM


your haiku are very visual...such great images they conjured in my mind...thank you
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