Open Poetry #10 |
In The Flight Of Passion |
A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
In The Flight Of Passion… Standing close enough to feel the warmth of your breath mixing with my own, the longing in my eyes dares you to kiss me With a scant brush of your lips you steal my breath and harness the desire revealed in my heart Feeling the electric charge of fervor in your embrace I am betrayed by my own sighs And in the showing of your soul as you take me I soar in the flight of passion. 11-4-00 |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
"Standing close enough to feel the warmth of your breathing mixing with my own, the longing in my eyes dares you to kiss me." Wonderful expression...these words are part of my dream, the warmth in her breath, the longing in her eyes, and the kissing, the dream continues...a few have shared my dream...James |
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SpitFire Member Elite
since 2000-04-19
Posts 2396 |
~Oh Yay!!! This is lovely. ahhh. Very nice. *Peace. |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
Inspiring!!!!!!!!!! "When red-haired girls scamper like roses over the rain-green grass, and the sun drips honey."" Laurie Lee Kathleen |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
Passions run in this poem. absolutely beautiful. the mix of breath, ah, I can relive it easily. Ron Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
"Flying without wings. . . " Wonderful poem my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
WhispersCaress~ Very nice. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
As soft and gentle as your pen name...welcome to Passions! |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
I would like to say thank you to all of the very friendly people here. I have been so welcomed, and love the warm comments I have received. Thank you once again. Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul. |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'Feeling the electric charge of fervor in your embrace I am betrayed by my own sighs' Very romantic! I love it!! sp Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Ahhhhh yes, this would do just nicely thank you very much. Whew....what I wouldn't give to have a moment like this. Very lovely and very romantic. |
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