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A Whisper's Caress
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on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-04 03:47 PM


In The Flight Of Passion…


Standing close enough
to feel the warmth
of your breath mixing
with my own, the longing
in my eyes dares you to kiss me

With a scant brush of your lips
you steal my breath and
harness the desire revealed
in my heart

Feeling the electric charge of fervor
in your embrace
I am betrayed by my own sighs

And in the showing of your soul
as you take me
I soar in the flight of passion.

11-4-00



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JamesMichael
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1 posted 2000-11-04 03:55 PM


"Standing close enough
to feel the warmth
of your breathing mixing
with my own, the longing
in my eyes dares you to kiss me."
Wonderful expression...these words are part of my dream, the warmth in her breath, the longing in her eyes, and the kissing, the dream continues...a few have shared my dream...James

SpitFire
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2 posted 2000-11-04 04:44 PM


~Oh Yay!!! This is lovely. ahhh. Very nice. *Peace.
Irish Rose
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3 posted 2000-11-04 06:24 PM


Inspiring!!!!!!!!!!

"When red-haired girls scamper like roses
over the rain-green grass,
and the sun drips honey.""
Laurie Lee

Kathleen



Ron K. Fox
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4 posted 2000-11-04 07:26 PM


Passions run in this poem. absolutely beautiful. the mix of breath, ah, I can relive it easily. Ron

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


Sven
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5 posted 2000-11-04 09:33 PM


"Flying without wings. . . "

Wonderful poem my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Marge Tindal
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6 posted 2000-11-04 09:35 PM


WhispersCaress~
Very nice.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Butterflies_dont_cry
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7 posted 2000-11-04 09:43 PM


As soft and gentle as your pen name...welcome to Passions!
A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
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on the horizon of a fairytale
8 posted 2000-11-04 11:42 PM


I would like to say thank you
to all of the very friendly
people here. I have been so welcomed,
and love the warm comments I have
received. Thank you once again.


Look within the heart of a poet, and you will see a reflection of their soul.

snowpants
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KS
9 posted 2000-11-05 01:54 AM


'Feeling the electric charge of fervor
in your embrace
I am betrayed by my own sighs'

Very romantic!  I love it!!

sp  

Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Mark Bohannan
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In the winds of Cherokee song
10 posted 2000-11-05 03:23 AM


Ahhhhh yes, this would do just nicely thank you very much.  Whew....what I wouldn't give to have a moment like this.  Very lovely and very romantic.  
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