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When You Found Me
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When You Found Me |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England 
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When You Found Me When I was alone, lost wandering in pain You found me and brought me back home again When my heart was aching, calling for peace You came to me bringing me a chance of release When I was searching for my lover true You showed me that I had only sought you When all around me was black as night You fetched me stars to shine their light When I had no reason to believe or trust You proved to me believe in you I must When my soul struggled to lift and then fly You kissed me tenderly making my heart sigh When at last I faced my truth about you I finally smiled as I said I love you Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Marsha.... Isn't it nice to have someone special there when we need it? I love this beautiful poem, and I don't think it's mushy at all....just simply wonderful, sis!!  Follow your dream! |
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Elizabeth
Moderator
Member Ascendant
since 1999-06-07
Posts 6871Minnesota |
Well, Mushy Marsha, what an expressive love poem you have penned here. I'm sure it was very much appreciated. Elizabeth You cling to your ways and leave mine to me. Suum cuique. ~Elizabeth |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Hiya lil sis, isn't it though. But yes sis it is pure mush and I care not. It's how I feel, isn't the world a beautiful place.  Elizabeth, I hope so, and thank you for reading. Take care Mushy Marsha  Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Lakewalker Member Elite
since 2000-08-05
Posts 3289On the streets w/ people |
I love the feeling you put into this, good job  "Disagreements stimulate thought, thought stimulates action, and action stimulates life." --Me!! |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Formatted in an interesting way, and of course the theme, ah, love, how nice it can be. Tell me, how long did you have to wander around in the dark till this magical man found you? I like this a lot, hope to be able to say the words again someday. Sandra |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
Marsha~Marsha~Marsha~ 'When all around me was black as night You fetched me stars to shine their light' What a WONDERFUL line. ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
'When all around me was black as night You fetched me stars to shine their light' Great poem, but these are my personal favorite lines, Marsha! Sucker for the stars, ya know! Excellent. Love it!! sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Lakewalker, Glad you like this, and thank you for replying. I just hope it made you smile. Sandra, the thing is love, that none of us knows how long we travel before we find who we seek. But you will find your special someone, I honestly believe there is a soulmate, for each of us. Although we stumble and fall in our search, you will find someone who makes you feel as wonderful as I do. Take care of yourself Mushy Marsha Marge, the whole poem was actually built around those two lines, and because my man is the one. Thank you Marge for your kind words. SP, they are my favourites too. And feeling so I could fly high and free. I'm a sucker for stars too, and the best thing is that my man serves them to me daily. Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Your admiration for a special someone beams through this poem like a bucket of stars' Very sweet and tender Liz |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
Wonderful oh Mushy one. . . I hope that you're finding that it's not all that bad to be mushy!!  Great poem. . . ---------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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Marsha
since 2000-07-10
Posts 7423Maidstone Kent England |
Elizabeth, so what gave me away do you think? No seriously, thank you, and he knows he definitely knows. (I don't do subtle very well, or at all really )Sven, actually I love being the mush queen, and thank you. Although the way I'm feeling I doubt if I could do anything other than mush, or maybe some passion too. I'll have to check that with SEA, she's my unofficial barometer. (Thanks SEA )Take care Mushy Marsha Take back the hope you gave,- I claim Only a memory of the same Robert Browning |
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