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Let Me Make Love to You
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Let Me Make Love to You |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
 The steam of the shower rises around you....filling your soul...washing cares away Shhhhhhhhh don’t think of them now....enjoy the warmth of the spray Bubbles of scent caressing your flesh.....troubles are running down the drain Fingers intertwine with shampooed locks....to remain tense would be in vain Warmed billows of cotton wrap and whisk away the beads from golden flesh Fragrance of steam, wild flowers and touch of warmed fabric refresh Head upon fluffed feathers...sighs escape your now relaxed form Heated oil and candle glow await your journey to the tension free storm Soft music plays..caressing your heart and soul as your body calls to me Hearts glowing in candlelight, souls singing as one...waiting to be set free Oil upon hands that hold a velvet touch...foot placed in palm...let the quest begin Over calf & thigh, kneading each muscle with care...gliding over your heated skin Each cord is caressed with the perfect stroke over your abdomen and back Your eye lids raise with anticipation....I whisper softly....No my dear...Just relax The touch is of pure care...your release of tension my only goal Sensations not of fire but of the warmest touch....to gently caress your soul Seizing your hand in mine....kneading these palms that are often neglected A warm smile within your eyes as you now see my true intentions reflected Only to give you this gift of innocence to know that you are loved My hands now move over the lines of your face..with care I’m gloved Your rhythmic breath sings to my senses knowing that my gift has been received Rise and fall of chest, a kiss to your relaxed brow all tension has been relieved Blankets now pulled over your form of tranquillity...I admire this moonlit view Knowing behind your lashed lids you have no doubts....I have made love to you |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Well, you are entirely too happy thses days  This is a beatiful love poem. Sandra |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
What a beautiful and loving way to do it...  sigh it relaxes you and leaves you full of contentment...I love this piece Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
WOW girlie... I have one question??? ME NEXT?? huhhhuhhuh LOL LOL Id kill for a massage about now ...  seriously tho... this is beautiful... yes...so often the thing that is lost of passion is... that it can be "more"...with "less" ... we can express and share without it always having to be about..... well you know  yayayayavery relaxing, serene, sensual and calming poem ... beautiful ... where does the line form magic fingers  hehelove ya me |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Butterflies_dont_cry - a very beautiful writing you have done. What would I do, if it was only me? Bill |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
ButterfliesDC~ A glistening moment ! *wink* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ noles1@totcon.com |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Butterflies-- "with care I'm gloved" This is true love making...so tenderly spoken..a gift that will give back to you. beautiful poem! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Holly- WOW...this is absolutely beautiful. this is so full of 'true' love... what 'making love' should always be about. very sensual, my friend. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Oh my, this is incredible. Whewww just to feel that awesome touch. Girl you penned this soooooo well. Ummm by the way, can you tell me where to get one of those?....LOL...Just great my friend, Love & hugs, Juls |
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Aimster Member Elite
since 2000-02-19
Posts 4297Charlotte, NC |
Holly-- wowsers! this was incredible. i loved the rhyme and flow of this whole peace. it gave off a serene yet powerful vibe. this should be what love is all about. i'm glad to see you're in good spirits. love ya, amy |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Just the right touch...James |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Okay...ya talked me into it. Seriously? I'm very proud of you lady. This is more than just good poetry, it's good living, babes!!! Enjoy. Love ya lots, lady. |
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Wilfred Yeats Member Elite
since 2000-08-04
Posts 2704Wilmington, Delaware |
I do not think I need say - you could do this for me ANYTIME! - woo hoo i'll have to believe it paid big dividends unsuitable for open #10 |
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Charisma
since 2000-09-30
Posts 5906lost in blue pages |
*wow*.....you have penned an awesome piece....filled with a lot of love.... superb girl....love it. ((hugs)) Charisma |
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jonmcm Member
since 2000-10-11
Posts 222England |
Wow! lost for words Jon |
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snowpants Member Elite
since 2000-09-16
Posts 2061KS |
Hey, butterflies! Very sensual!! Love it!!  sp  Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson |
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Irish Rose Member Patricius
since 2000-04-06
Posts 10263 |
whoo hoo!!!!!!!!! [This message has been edited by Irish Rose (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
I'm so happy that you liked this...and the line forms to the right  My thanks to each and every one of you..please know that each comment is appreciated and cherished. ((hugs)) to all! |
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Balladeer
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-05
Posts 25505Ft. Lauderdale, Fl USA |
This is, by far, the greatest poem I have ever seen about a girl giving her dog a bath! Fabulous! Does your mother know you write this way? |
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Ron K. Fox Senior Member
since 2000-10-24
Posts 925 |
wow...I feel the tension going already, beautiful work...ummm I have this knot in the back of my neck... Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
'Deer...I have 4 words for you...Like Mother Like Daughter Thank you sir~Ron* Massage is one of the little pleasures in life...I very much enjoy the thought of helping someone relax...thank you~ |
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EagleOne Member Elite
since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829Between a laugh and a tear... |
Awesome!! line up to the right you say, but it is such a long line!  "The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest" ~ My Angel. |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
OH my ...  Dare I be tempted by the massage of a butterfly? This is so full of the love and the tenderness that I know your heart to carry and if this isn't making love then nothing is. Afterall, love and making love and sharing love ALL come from the heart and are just emotions finding new ways to show themselves. I am so glad to find you flowing over with the passion to find what you deserve so much and I do know that one of the biggest parts of you is to show your love by giving of yourself in the ways that YOU FEEL. Very sensuous write my friend. One of my favorites of yours.....there are so many, please never ask me to pick just one...(would be biased anyway LOL) |
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wayoutwalt Member Elite
since 1999-06-22
Posts 4870TEXAS (it's all big) |
what i get for scanning replies b4 reading the poem is that at the end i thought you were gonna pull a dog outta the bath but i am kinda glad yuh didnt lil disappointed tho but wow steamy great job here yuh yuh |
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Christopher
Moderator
Member Rara Avis
since 1999-08-02
Posts 8296Purgatorial Incarceration |
Can I just say ok??? |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Eagle my friend...you may have cuts in line thank you Mark* Many thanks for your reply of sunshine~ Walt* You always make me laugh...thank you my friend~ SC's* Let me just say....My Turn |
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spiked Senior Member
since 2000-01-13
Posts 873Hammond, La USA |
Butterflies Steam not only in the shower, This is very sensual and romantic. Great job Rich |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Only to give you this gift of innocence to know that you are loved My hands now move over the lines of your face..with care I’m gloved very very nice, BDC ~Wynter "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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shadow of poetry Member
since 2000-07-22
Posts 76midwest usa |
OH YES you know what im going to print this one out and MAKE my husband read it and then DO it haha you are so right SSButterfly,we can all learn from this what a beautiful romantic poem sis says im suppose to tell you if we can ever get the hubbies out of the woods chasing bambi, then maybe we can teach them a new trick or too haha good thing i like deer meat huh? fantastic poem butterfly see ya next time i steal sis's computer trisha my sister is the poet I am but a shadow. by the light of poetry I read then dream |
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Lone Wolf Member Ascendant
since 2000-03-16
Posts 5842Lansing, MI USA |
BDC, WOW!!! This is stunning my friend!! Soft, sensual, romantic in every way. Excellent writing, Butterfly. I am so happy to see things going so well for you dear one. Take care. **HUGS** LW Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Rich* Thank you...I sure tried Wynter* Thank you~ Trisha* Good luck to you...the first thing to teach them is GIVE and you shall RECEIVE My hubby monster is learning quite well and is teaching ME a few tricks as well...now if I can just land that double back flip....*sigh* Thank you!!LW* Thank you my friend...means so much that you feel that way...my best to you as well!! |
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