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Seasons Of No Return |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina 
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Seasons Of No Return She watches from inside her window, Praying for his return. Flowers bloom in her garden, She counts them one by one. Tender Spring, Will you bring him back to her? Children run and play, Sprinklers working hard. Grass so plush and green. No one sees her broken heart. Sweet Summer, Will you bring him back to her? Fall leaves begin to turn, Colors bold and bright. Cool air now chills her, As she walks alone this night. Majestic Autumn, Will you bring him back to her? Early morn brings snowfall. She looks into blue sky. Tears she sheds knowing, It's time to say goodbye. Beautiful Winter, Will only bring her yearning For these are all the seasons, Seasons of no return. |
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Butterflies_dont_cry Member Elite
since 2000-03-06
Posts 3733Michigan |
Juls* The seasons turned as did the emotions that you wove along with the exceptional imagery...excellent writing! |
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Elizabeth Santos Member Rara Avis
since 1999-11-08
Posts 9269Pennsylvania |
Beautiful display of the seasons and a reminder that we cannot relive the past I loved it Liz |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
some things are ever changing...yet contstant in the change ... wonderful writing and use of analogies of the seasons ... lovely in its longing and emotions take care jm |
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BSC
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Member Elite
since 2000-02-04
Posts 2919New York, USA |
A bittersweet year Juls ~ The beauty of the seasons, while an ache just simmers inside. Beautiful. Bonnie |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
Holly, your words warm my heart. Thanks so much. Liz, how very sweet of you. Thank you bunches. Janet, thanks so much for stopping in. Your kind words mean much. Bonnie, you read it well. That ache has healed now, thank goodness. Who knows, love may come again one day. Thanks so much my sweet friend. Love & hugs to you all, Juls |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
And with the change of season may your heart finds it glory. A beautiful poem. |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
Very lovely juls..enjoyed very much.  HUGS~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
the seasons will bring back to us sometimes, that which we wish for. . . wonderful my friend. . . -------------------------------------------------------- That which gives light must endure burning --Victor Frankl |
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juliet_2u Senior Member
since 2000-07-23
Posts 1125North Carolina |
AWG, thank you so much for your well wishes and your kind words. And also welcome to Passions. You'll love it here. Victoria, thanks sweetie. It's always a joy to hear from you my dear friend. Hugs right back to ya. Sven, yes for some they may do that. Those wishes were from long ago and I've healed now from all the pain. I may still write about it but thank God I've moved on. Thanks so much my kind friend. Love & hugs, to you all, Juls |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Such words of yearning. Don't we all just wish to have a touch of love to blanket us? Maybe the season of Winter will grace you in glistening flakes, bringing a new pureness to your life. All one can do is hope... Juliet, thank you for a beautiful poem to read this morning. ~Wynter Bliss "The worst prison would be a closed heart". ...Pope John Paul II |
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