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On The Wings Of Butterflies

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EagleOne
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Between a laugh and a tear...


25 posted 11-05-2000 02:54 PM       View Profile for EagleOne   Email EagleOne   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for EagleOne

"I don't need a hundred scented candles burning,
for I can see your eyes in one single flames glow.
I don't need to read anymore poetry ...
for your rhymes of me ... told me all I ever need to know"

Wow! You do know how good this is don't you Janet? Fabulous!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.
Janet Marie
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26 posted 11-05-2000 09:54 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

lil sis ...thank you my blonde girlie..
you made it worth you stealing my puter all afternoon with this beautiful reply.
thank you for celebrating him with me always.
love you too.

poetboy96 ... welcome to passions and thank you for such a wonderful, compliment, nice to have you and your eyes here

Spitfire... my goodness what a wonderful reply...you make me feel like I could fly  and trust me when I tell you your poetry nor
your replies "lack strength" ...
I understand what you are saying tho ...
I too read many more poems than I have time to reply to...thank you SO much for this gracious one you left me today.

Eagle ... thank you very much for the fabulous reply and what "I know" is that it felt VERY GOOD to write it...I leave the judging of "how" good it is up to my fellow poets...
thank you my kind friend.  

thank you all for these beautiful replies
love ya
jm

Rosemary J. Gwaltney
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northern mountains, Idaho


27 posted 11-05-2000 11:08 PM       View Profile for Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Email Rosemary J. Gwaltney   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Rosemary J. Gwaltney's Home Page   View IP for Rosemary J. Gwaltney

I just saw this, and absolutely fell in love with it!  Lovely!  Absolutely beautiful love poem!  Well written, and sweet.  What a treat!!!!!!

The Poetic Plumber
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28 posted 11-05-2000 11:13 PM       View Profile for The Poetic Plumber   Email The Poetic Plumber   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for The Poetic Plumber

I was very moved by your writing.  You have great poetic expression.  Thank You! Roger

tracie66
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29 posted 11-06-2000 06:55 AM       View Profile for tracie66   Email tracie66   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit tracie66's Home Page   View IP for tracie66

Beautiful poem
from a beautiful heart
for a beautiful soul
...well penned lovely heart
winged ~HUGS~ Janny
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe


Janet Marie
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30 posted 11-06-2000 11:22 AM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Rosemary...thank you so much for this beautiful, sweet reply ....its so nice to see your name here again.

Roger ... welcome to passions and thank you much for such a kind reply. Its nice to meet you.

Tracie ....hi sweetie... thanks for always reading and leaving me a smile  

thanks to all
love ya
jm
compassion
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31 posted 11-07-2000 09:26 AM       View Profile for compassion   Email compassion   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for compassion

JM, **
  This is so beautiful. My words can do justice to what it says to me. Awesome... went looking for your poem,'driving,centerline',  will find it tonight but do love this one!
Janet Marie
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32 posted 11-07-2000 02:03 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

compassion...welcome to passions and thank you so very much, I am very complimented that you would seek out my work...
I look forward to being able to see your work.I have seen many of your enthusiastic replies on various poets work, ita obvious you love poetry.

take care
JM

thanks to all who replied to this...
this poem has become very special to me
for many reasons..
but mostly due to his presence in me that allows me to write of him like this..
somethings never leave us ...
somethings never should.
I love you Vante ... always.



There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

suthern
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on the threshold of a dream


33 posted 11-07-2000 02:34 PM       View Profile for suthern   Email suthern   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for suthern

This is incredibly lovely... I'd try to find words to do it justice if I could see through the tears. *S*
Parker
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... the old black rum


34 posted 11-07-2000 03:21 PM       View Profile for Parker   Email Parker   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Parker's Home Page   View IP for Parker

Janet, another wonderful heart poem for your DeVante... I know he lives in you.  

Parker
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Deep in the heart


35 posted 11-07-2000 05:36 PM       View Profile for Interloper   Email Interloper   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Interloper

I can add nothing to what was said above.  God bless you and keep DeVante.

Love is.
Sunshine
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Listening to every heart


36 posted 11-07-2000 05:49 PM       View Profile for Sunshine   Email Sunshine   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Sunshine's Home Page   View IP for Sunshine

Never let it be said that you don't put the whip cream topping on the brownie fudge desert...

seriously, this is a remarkable piece, may I place it in my library?  THANKS!


Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ


SEA
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with you


37 posted 11-07-2000 06:00 PM       View Profile for SEA   Email SEA   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for SEA

Janet~ everything you write is poetic gold.....I just love the sway and flow of this..... -SEA
Janet Marie
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38 posted 11-07-2000 07:57 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

southern ...thank you VERYmuch...I always feel your sincerity in your replies ...
your tears do him all the justice that needs be said.

P-man ... thank you sweets....I know he is indeed my sweetest muse and when i am given the gift thru him to write of him...I feel him there...
so where ya been anyway ...missed ya  

Interloper..thank you very much and bless you for this wondeful reply welcome to passions.

Sun.....I would be very honored to be in your library...I know I will be in oustanding company...THANK YOU for the remarkable reply..

Sea...thank you sweetie...your replies are poetic gold  

thanks again to all for these wonderful accepting replies
love ya all in poetry land
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Butterflies_dont_cry
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39 posted 11-08-2000 09:21 AM       View Profile for Butterflies_dont_cry   Email Butterflies_dont_cry   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Butterflies_dont_cry

I needed the kiss of butterfly wings today...
I love seeing him live on in every breath
you weave sweet SS~
ethome
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since 05-14-2000
Posts 11545
New Brunswick Canada


40 posted 11-08-2000 09:47 AM       View Profile for ethome   Email ethome   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit ethome's Home Page   View IP for ethome

You knocked the poet right out of yourself in the first part then you proceeded to put it right back in with more eloquence than ever.. I have to say I was worried I thought you'd fallen in love and you were going to forget about poetry......then I thought ..this is Janet you're talking about and it's not possible for the most wonderful man in the world to take the poetry out of her...so I relaxed and read the rest of the poem which turned into a thing of beauty......very very well done!! my kindhearted poet friend....I thought it was VANtastic!!
Jenn E
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since 08-02-2000
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Kelowna, BC, Canada


41 posted 11-08-2000 10:13 AM       View Profile for Jenn E   Email Jenn E   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Jenn E

Janet,
I love how he lives inside you........I am in awe of your heart and how you feel and how you turn what could be "sad and heavy" to the heart into strength and beauty.......I look up to you in so many ways...but also know that it all does not come without a price.  Beautiful read. Thank you for being you......
Jenn E
BloomingRose
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42 posted 11-08-2000 10:32 AM       View Profile for BloomingRose   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for BloomingRose

JM~ This is very romantic, and extremely beautiful. One of your best yet!
Deb
Janet Marie
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43 posted 11-08-2000 06:06 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Holly girl..THANK YOU  ....your butterfly kisses are welcome here as often as you like...love ya me SS

E-babes....you are so right...nothing or no one will ever take the place of poetry in me..thank you for such an all knowing and accepting reply my dear friend.

Jenn, thank you very much for such a warm sweet reply...I promise theres no emotional cost when I write of him...I celebrate him and the way he inspires me.

Deb...thank you for such a beautiful reply...and for the high compliment.
this one is special to me.

thank you sweet poets...very much
jm
Marina
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Pickering, Ontario


44 posted 11-08-2000 07:31 PM       View Profile for Marina   Email Marina   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Marina

Thanks for the "heads up" on this one!!  
You know how much I LOVE DeVante's visits!!!  

Jan, I think this is got to be one of my all time favourites of yours.  He brings imagery to your pen like no muse I have seen.  "Butterflies are meant to be free" and he shall be free for always and captured only in your heart for as long as your thoughts are with him.  Another for my Library collection of a dear soul, I have yet to meet...  


Marina


It is a blessing to have wings for words, and passion in pen
Marina Crossley

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In Your Poetic Mind


45 posted 11-08-2000 07:40 PM       View Profile for Greeneyes   Email Greeneyes   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Greeneyes

how your words touch all my emotions.....and fill my eyes with tears.....I have enjoyed all your soul touches.....

Greeneyes

"Within you I lose myself
Without you I find myself
Wanting to be lost again."
-Unknown

jwesley
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since 04-30-2000
Posts 6413
Texas . . .


46 posted 11-08-2000 07:48 PM       View Profile for jwesley   Email jwesley   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for jwesley

Well, JM, I keep seeing this thing pop back up to the top and shaking my head & saying ...yep, knew it'd be back...so decided to go back for another reread and browse the responses.  It took three browses top to bottom before I realized...MINE WAS NOT THERE!

OOPS! or Whoops! or Who Erased Mine!...
dunno where it went me friend...just knew I had written somethin' in there...so solly!

Exquisite (or how ever that word's spelled) as usual from you, long time favorite of mine. One day, maybe I'll learn a thing or three from you.

jwesley
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47 posted 11-08-2000 07:56 PM       View Profile for serenity blaze   Email serenity blaze   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for serenity blaze

Jan---I could've sworn I replied to this--must have been an e mail.  

This, included with the others, his and yours, would make a truly cherished book of love--the gentle loyalty and beauty of this is astonishing and poignant. I'm in awe, me twin. Hugs to you.
Janet Marie
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48 posted 11-08-2000 09:44 PM       View Profile for Janet Marie   Email Janet Marie   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Janet Marie

Marina...thank you sweets.....I always love the way you celebrate him with me..
ya make me smile  

greeneyes....thank you very much...and I yours....

JW....its never too late to say something so wonderful...thank you very much sir.

Sen...baby..you know the party dont start till you get here...
and you know I already know before you say it  
thank you for such a beautiful idea and for always just being there...always knowing
love ya

thank you seems too little to say to all these replies as well....
my love and respect to all here....always...
jm

There are places inside our souls -
that have never been touched.
There are places inside our hearts -
that need to be loved this much.
~jm~

Kit McCallum
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Posts 16920
Ontario, Canada


49 posted 11-08-2000 09:55 PM       View Profile for Kit McCallum   Email Kit McCallum   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kit McCallum

"No longer do I wish on silvered diamond falling stars,
nor do I gaze at the neon moon so blue.
I don't search the indigo midnight sky ...
hoping to catch a glimpse of you."

"You are the crystalline oceans that rise up inside of me,
together we lie on my soul's white beaches of sand.
You are the ivory tides that pull at my beings gravity,
the moment I touched infinite ... was the moment you touched my hand."

Sigh ... JM, this is just magical! What a beautifully enchanting read, with so many wonderfully descriptive lines. Your heart shines through this so brilliantly. What a lovely tribute to DeVante'  

Best wishes,
/Kit
 
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