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“Three Hearts….Three Lives….Three Loves”
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“Three Hearts….Three Lives….Three Loves” |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England 
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 If a heart can hold two loves… Both of them in different ways… Is it right to choose between the two, who goes, and which one stays? If a kiss is shared with one… and when you close your eyes… Is it wrong to see the other’s face, and hear their lonely sighs? If one of them is here… and the other is oh so far… Is it right to share with one, and feel the other in your heart? If when you search your soul… and know these loves are real… Is it wrong to wish that you could say exactly how you feel? Three hearts…three lives…three loves… Three stories entertwined… No one knows just how the ending goes, but it goes to the edge of time…  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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peppermint35 Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106Texas, USA |
This is really amazing work!!! Enjoyed the read  Pepper "I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place" Ram Dass |
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Mark Bohannan Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269In the winds of Cherokee song |
Love has no rules in the dealings within the heart, it only has rules in dwellings of the land. It can be very confusing at times especially when there is an empty hole from a love that can be filled by another of heart. I am afraid that there are no easy answers to this one my dear sweet sister. Hugs to you my sweet friend. |
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ethome Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858New Brunswick Canada |
This happens so easy and just what to you do in that triangle of emotions...great writing!! The rhyme , rhythum and meter is so tight with well chosen words....take care..ethome |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Peppermint35 ~~~ < !signature-->Thank you so much!! I'm glad you liked it!!  Follow your dream! [This message has been edited by Sunny1 (edited 11-04-2000).] |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
If a kiss is shared with one… and when you close your eyes… Is it wrong to see the other’s face, and hear their lonely sighs? ======================= If when you search your soul… and know these loves are real… Is it wrong to wish that you could say exactly how you feel? Three hearts…three lives…three loves… Three stories entertwined… No one knows just how the ending goes, but it goes to the edge of time… ============== OH girl you have no idea how this one hits home .. Sunny this is excellent!!! I love this ones emotions superb, sincere, honest poetry... perfect...truely take care jm |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Mark ~~~ No, there are no easy answers to this one. But we all seem to search for them, anyway! It is good to have you visit, my brother! ~~~ ethome ~~~ Thank you, my friend......I do really appreciate your reply and having you read! ~~~ jm ~~~ If this one hit home, I hope it did it gently! I'm always so glad to see your replies, as I know you will see what my words meant!! Thank you....... Follow your dream! |
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vlraynes Member Rara Avis
since 2000-07-25
Posts 8229Somewhere... out there... |
Sunny- this is so beautiful. such loving and longing intertwined in this. wonderful write. hugs, -vicky "...until you have read the verse on his heart, you have not truely met the poet." -vlraynes |
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catalinamoon
since 2000-06-03
Posts 9543The Shores of Alone |
Great thoughts, Sunny. I hope things go well for you. I think I would write this with (4) lives. But now there is only one for me, and its my own, and it is not enough..  Sandra |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
~~~ Vicky ~~~ Thank you, and I'm glad that you came by to read! There really is a lot of emotions tangled up here, but that was bound to happen! ~~~ Sandra ~~~ Oh, my friend.....numbers can be added or subtracted, as with everything in life. I wish for you to soon be a 2-some!! Follow your dream! |
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Victoria
since 2000-08-12
Posts 5869 |
a heart wrenching feeling..loving more then one..being torn in two directions..nicely written Sunny.. Enjoyed~Victoria~ A poem is never finished, only abandoned. - Paul Valery (1871-1945) |
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Sunnyone Member Ascendant
since 2000-07-06
Posts 5334Staffordshire, England |
Thank you, Victoria! Yes, it is heart-wrenching......especially if the love is equal, but in different ways. What then? Thanks for stopping by! Follow your dream! |
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