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A Whisper's Caress
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since 2000-11-03
Posts 791
on the horizon of a fairytale

0 posted 2000-11-04 01:17 AM


In The Creation Of My Heart…

In the creation of my heart

My soul has placed a remnant of past love

Painted like a mural

The image of you inexplicable hangs

In the foyer of my being.



© Copyright 2000 Annie - All Rights Reserved
Mark Bohannan
Member Rara Avis
since 2000-06-21
Posts 7269
In the winds of Cherokee song
1 posted 2000-11-04 01:22 AM


And I will bet that is some beautiful forum as well. Welcome to Passions and I do hope you stay and enjoy and also allow us to enjoy many of yours as well.
peppermint35
Senior Member
since 2000-05-28
Posts 1106
Texas, USA
2 posted 2000-11-04 01:36 AM


Beautiful painting you did here too

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

ethome
Member Patricius
since 2000-05-14
Posts 11858
New Brunswick Canada
3 posted 2000-11-04 01:41 AM


I welcome you!! Good start you said a lot in a few short lines but you did in such a way as to stimulate the readers perspective...very well done!!...ethome
EagleOne
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since 2000-03-07
Posts 2829
Between a laugh and a tear...
4 posted 2000-11-04 01:44 AM


I agree, you have crafted a wonderful picture here!

"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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