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Aimster
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0 posted 2000-11-03 10:39 PM


"Love & Desire"

I'd give anything for just another kiss
To stay forever wrapped in ecstacy and bliss
My lips trace over yours in sweet sublime
As love and passion are our only crime

The heat threatens to consume me, match to flame
One kiss from you and I never was the same
You make me crazy, delirious with desire
As flame now turns to blazing fire

The love in my heart is ignited with esctacy
And forever in your arms, I could stay an eternity
A night with you, is a dream come true
As I stare into your eyes of baby blue

The straight and narrow path I always do take
But with you all risks I'd be willing to make
I want to drown into your power, and be seduced by your charms
Forever I could lay embraced by your arms

The ache within me gently begins to ease
As my heart and soul are finally free
You say that you love me and my spirit does fly
Tears of happiness and joy I begin to cry

Angel of mine, this is a combination of lust and love
And deep in our hearts, we know it was sent from above
So throw caution to the wind and let's take this chance
It had destiny and fate written all over it, from the first glance

~Amy Kennedy~

© Copyright 2000 Amy Kennedy - All Rights Reserved
Victoria
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1 posted 2000-11-03 10:52 PM


destiny and fate ...from first glance..i like that amy..enjoyed..

             ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Ron K. Fox
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2 posted 2000-11-03 10:54 PM


when destiny beckons you must go. heed the calling. beautiful verses.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


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3 posted 2000-11-03 10:58 PM


Jeez, Amy!!! Stop beating around the bush and tell him how you feel!!!  
Aimster
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4 posted 2000-11-04 01:57 PM


thanks for the comments! and Bal trust me they know how i feel  

Take care.
Amy  


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5 posted 2000-11-04 02:09 PM


Amy wonderful words to your love. I know just how you feel, amazing isn't it.  

I really love this one Amy it has such an honesty and it's just brilliant.
Take care
               Mushy Marsha
                  


Take back the hope you gave,- I claim
Only a memory of the same
Robert Browning

Charisma
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6 posted 2000-11-04 02:20 PM


*sigh*....so beautiful and delighted....love and desire, and you penned that with a lot of fire...
well done.

Charisma

Janet Marie
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7 posted 2000-11-04 02:48 PM


Now whose heating up the forums and steaming screens  LOL
Im glad to see someone else having those raging hormones beside me   LOL
awesome Amy...
passionate and kissed with promise
I LOOOOOVE that last line...
it rocks!
I got your note today in mail...
thank you sweetie...very much ..
and I feel the same way.

go for it all ...its your time
love ya
me

snowpants
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8 posted 2000-11-04 03:11 PM


'The love in my heart is ignited with esctacy
And forever in your arms, I could stay an eternity
A night with you, is a dream come true
As I stare into your eyes of baby blue'

Well, Aim, you've done it again, 'Miss Writer's Block.'  LOL
Absolutely beautiful.  Definitely one I'm going to save!!

sp  


Do not go where the path may lead, but instead, go where there is no path and leave a trail. - Ralph Waldo Emerson

Sven
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9 posted 2000-11-04 09:50 PM


Amy,
    and you tell me that I'm the Romantic one!  

This is just great my friend. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


EagleOne
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10 posted 2000-11-05 01:29 AM


"The straight and narrow path I always do take
But with you all risks I'd be willing to make"

Don't you just love the way love and desire can do that to you.   Great work Amy!


"The heart and soul have no illusion of boundries when friendship is the quest"
~ My Angel.

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11 posted 2000-11-05 02:09 AM


Amy~
Such nicely penned emotions.
That fella with the baby blues is one lucky guy
to have you for the stars in his eyes !
Love, hugs n' more.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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