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Sven
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0 posted 2000-11-03 09:15 PM


rainbow heart
tender spirit
gentle star
blessed to be near it

open mind
warming arms
softest voice
among many charms

sweetest words
passions pen
written new
to be read again

happy poet
smiling friend
always loved
now until the end

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


© Copyright 2000 John Garcia - All Rights Reserved
Marge Tindal
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1 posted 2000-11-03 09:22 PM


Sven~

Yes ! Yes !
She is just the most adorable spirit.
Her enthusiasm shows in everything she does.

You've done her justice ...
won't she have a wonderful early morning surprise !

Thanks for adding Tracie to your gallery.
You're quite the gallery-keep.
~*Marge*~


~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Sunshine
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2 posted 2000-11-03 09:27 PM


She will love this...such a tribute!

Karilea
If I whisper, will you listen?...
I would rather be silent and write, then speak loudly and be bound.
KRJ



tracie66
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3 posted 2000-11-03 10:01 PM


WOW!!!!
sven I'm totally blown away by this and man if you new me in the flesh you would know that I'm so tatally embarrassed when I'm placed in the spotlight it's just as well you can't see my face...LOL but hey my dear friend I thank you and I'm so humbled to be added to your beautiful gallery.
Sven you are one dear heart  
All my love and winged ~HUGS~ my friend
Love Tracie~

Dear Marge
You are so right   I was sooo surprised and amazed to see this. Thanks hon for you lovely comments
Love Tracie~

Sunshine~
sweetie Oh I do love it  and it is such an honour
Love Tracie~


Love is the life of the soul...
It is the harmony of the universe



peppermint35
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4 posted 2000-11-03 10:11 PM


Who paints true pictures with a pen
Who shows us the faces behind our friends
Who makes us cheerful without end
No one does it better than Sven!!!!

Good job, Sven....no wonder you're proud tracie, it's a fitting tribute!!!

Pepper
"I honor the place in you, that when you are in that place, and I am in that place in me, we are in the same place"
Ram Dass

Ron K. Fox
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5 posted 2000-11-03 11:07 PM


This is great Sven, she is such a nice person and always has a kind and motivational response. You've got a big heart there, no wonder you've so many loyal friends. The best to ya.

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


juliet_2u
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6 posted 2000-11-03 11:07 PM


This is just gorgeous, so fitting for such a sweet person. Really lovely Sven.

Tracie you are loved by us all.

Juls

Alle'cram
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7 posted 2000-11-03 11:12 PM


Sven, So descript, glad you introduced her to me via this poem; will certainly catch her work now! What a heart you have, can't help but love ya!     Marcy
Sven
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8 posted 2000-11-04 10:14 PM


Marge, thank you. . . I try to keep a great gallery. . . and yes, Tracie's enthusiasm shows in everything she does. . .  

Sunshine, thank you my friend. . .  

tracie, you are one wonderful friend. . . you've always been a good friend and inspiration to me. . . and I'm so glad that you liked this. . . and maybe you should be in the spotlight more. . .    glad that you enjoyed. . . thank you again. . .

peppermint. . . thank you. . . I just try to show them as I see them. . . wonderful poets and people all. . .

Ron. . . thank you my friend. . . that's why we're here. . .

Juls, thank you my friend. . . she is a sweet person isn't she?

Marcy, I'm so glad that you'll take the time to read her work. . . it is wonderful, and I hope that you enjoy it as much as I do. . . thank you. . .

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That which gives light must endure burning
--Victor Frankl


Kethry
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9 posted 2000-11-05 04:15 AM


Sven,
another beautiful write, what a gallery you are building. So spot on about Tracie, she's great isn't she.
Kethry


Growth demands a temporary surrender of security.
Gail Sheehy

Temptress
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10 posted 2000-11-05 03:50 PM


Beautiful truth!  
Kit McCallum
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11 posted 2000-11-05 04:58 PM


You have a lovely way of capturing such beautiful qualities in your friends Sven ... this is a wonderful portrayal of Tracie, very nicely done!  

Best wishes,
/Kit

Lone Wolf
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12 posted 2000-11-05 07:20 PM


Sven,
In my opinion, you have captured Tracie beautifully.  She is all this and so much more.  Well done.  

Tracie,
Thank you so much for being such a wonderful friend and for just being you!!  You are the best in my book!!  

Lone Wolf


Poetry should surprise by fine excess...it should strike the reader as a wording of his own highest thoughts and appear almost a remembrance. -J.Keats

kaile
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13 posted 2000-11-24 09:05 PM


lovely lovely lovely....  

i liked the lines:
softest voice
among many charms

so sweet of you to say that

[This message has been edited by kaile (edited 11-24-2000).]

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