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Robert Joseph
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0 posted 2000-11-03 07:37 PM




Interpret Spring


Lips kissed in winter,
tarry in the soul's garden.
Pearl white snow drifts,
lay pillows on earth's floor.
Eyes watch the mountain top,
for signs of spring.


Robert Joseph
~enb~
''Whisky Kisses''


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Ron K. Fox
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1 posted 2000-11-03 07:43 PM


A beautiful spring picture you do paint...I can almost see the crocus beginning to pop up any second now.Thanks, an enjoyable little read

Tossing words like wishful coins into the deep well of an open heart. R. fox


inot2B
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2 posted 2000-11-03 07:46 PM


Thinking of spring is real nice, but I'm still waiting for any cool weather where I live.
Robert Joseph
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3 posted 2000-11-03 08:07 PM


Ron, Thanks so much, I'm glad you enjoyed this piece.

Robert Joseph

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inot2B, I normally don't respond so quickly to pieces I just posted, but I found your remarks amusing. I can assure you, my thoughts were not on the weather...wink!
Thanks for reading.

Robert Joseph

inot2B
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4 posted 2000-11-03 08:13 PM


Ok, I get the picture, but you got to understand it's hot down in Texas and
it's hard to think of anything that would
bring more heat.

Charisma
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5 posted 2000-11-03 08:13 PM


wished that the spring was allready here, winter is always sooooo cold.
enjoyed reading it.
well done
((hugs))

Charisma

Victoria
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6 posted 2000-11-03 09:08 PM


sounds like winter is about to shed her white coat ha.. nice one Robert

                 ~Victoria~


A poem is never finished, only abandoned.
- Paul Valery (1871-1945)


Denise
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7 posted 2000-11-04 07:34 AM


Very beautiful, Robert!

Denise

Elizabeth Santos
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8 posted 2000-11-04 07:44 AM


Lovely vision of the coming of spring
Liz

Robert Joseph
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9 posted 2000-11-04 05:39 PM


Charisma, Victoria, Denise, and Elizabeth
Thanks so much, I'm pleased to know you each enjoyed this piece.

Robert Joseph

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